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saaz-e-dil* - 4th January 2006, 11:27 AM
dil ke saaz par barbaad-mohabbat ka tarana rehne do
yaadon ki phulwadiyon mei pyaar ka woh zamana rehne do!

gul kar do har chirag meri zindagi ka doston
magar unke intezaar mein aakhon ka yeh parwana rehne do!

ro-ro kar guzari hai har shab-e-furkat meine
wasl ki chaah mein woh dil ka jalana rehne do!

tinke tinke se jiske aati thi bu-e-wafa kabhi
meri ulfat ka woh ujra hua aashiyaana rehne do!

sahil-e-ulfat pe pahunchne wali thi naav-e-mohabbat
phir mauzon ke toofan mein safina doob jaana rehne do!

kehte phirte ho ke hai humare dum se "roshani"
Ae bewafa ab to is dil pe haqh jatana rehne do!

gul karna- bujha dena
shab-e-furkat-birah ki raat
wasl-milan
bu-e-wafa-prem sugandh
sahil-e-ulfat-prem kinare
naav-e-mohabbat-pyaar ki kashti
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Re: saaz-e-dil* - 4th January 2006, 12:03 PM
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dil ke saaz par barbaad-mohabbat ka tarana rehne do
yaadon ki phulwadiyon mei pyaar ka woh zamana rehne do!

gul kar do har chirag meri zindagi ka doston
magar unke intezaar mein aakhon ka yeh parwana rehne do!

ro-ro kar guzari hai har shab-e-furkat meine
wasl ki chaah mein woh dil ka jalana rehne do!

tinke tinke se jiske aati thi bu-e-wafa kabhi
meri ulfat ka woh ujra hua aashiyaana rehne do!

sahil-e-ulfat pe pahunchne wali thi naav-e-mohabbat
phir mauzon ke toofan mein safina doob jaana rehne do!

kehte phirte ho ke hai humare dum se "roshani"
Ae bewafa ab to is dil pe haqh jatana rehne do!

gul karna- bujha dena
shab-e-furkat-birah ki raat
wasl-milan
bu-e-wafa-prem sugandh
sahil-e-ulfat-prem kinare
naav-e-mohabbat-pyaar ki kashti
maujhein- lehrein
safeena-kashti


hi Jas,
kafi time baad dekha tumhe yahan
per waapis aayi ho ik naye kalaam ke saath
sacch bahut hi pyara likha hai tumne
yu hi likhti rehna...

SHWETA


jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
wo waqt suhana hota hai

uth jati hai kalam likhne ko
wo pyar deewana hota hai

kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan
wo kalaam shayraana hota hai

jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
wo waqt suhana hota hai...

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roshani - 4th January 2006, 01:08 PM
tumhere alfaz se main ek roshni to hai
har baat main koyee zindgee to hai
bahut uljhee baten karata hai zamana
kisee kee baat main ek sadgee to hai
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4th January 2006, 06:05 PM
nahut hi khubsurat jas dd

meri har chahat se pehle ek chahat hogi
wo chahat hamesha tum hogi
ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main
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4th January 2006, 07:47 PM
hi roshani,

bahaut hi khoobsurat likha hai, yakeen maniye hume bahaut pasand aaya........bas yuhi likte rahiye...

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4th January 2006, 08:12 PM
bahoot achha likha hai didi

Anant se bhi aage... itni si khwahish hai :)
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Re: saaz-e-dil* - 4th January 2006, 09:36 PM
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dil ke saaz par barbaad-mohabbat ka tarana rehne do
yaadon ki phulwadiyon mei pyaar ka woh zamana rehne do!

gul kar do har chirag meri zindagi ka doston
magar unke intezaar mein aakhon ka yeh parwana rehne do!

ro-ro kar guzari hai har shab-e-furkat meine
wasl ki chaah mein woh dil ka jalana rehne do!

tinke tinke se jiske aati thi bu-e-wafa kabhi
meri ulfat ka woh ujra hua aashiyaana rehne do!

sahil-e-ulfat pe pahunchne wali thi naav-e-mohabbat
phir mauzon ke toofan mein safina doob jaana rehne do!

kehte phirte ho ke hai humare dum se "roshani"
Ae bewafa ab to is dil pe haqh jatana rehne do!

gul karna- bujha dena
shab-e-furkat-birah ki raat
wasl-milan
bu-e-wafa-prem sugandh
sahil-e-ulfat-prem kinare
naav-e-mohabbat-pyaar ki kashti
maujhein- lehrein
safeena-kashti
Bahuat khoobsurat nazm likhi hai aapne, saath mein jo lafzon ke matlab hain, woh bhi lajawwab

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4th January 2006, 10:04 PM
dil ke saaz par barbaad-mohabbat ka tarana rehne do
yaadon ki phulwadiyon mei pyaar ka woh zamana rehne do!

gul kar do har chirag meri zindagi ka doston
magar unke intezaar mein aakhon ka yeh parwana rehne do!

Waah... nice words Jas..!


ro-ro kar guzari hai har shab-e-furkat meine
wasl ki chaah mein woh dil ka jalana rehne do!

tinke tinke se jiske aati thi bu-e-wafa kabhi
meri ulfat ka woh ujra hua aashiyaana rehne do!

Waaaaahhh....beautifully expressed here....!


sahil-e-ulfat pe pahunchne wali thi naav-e-mohabbat
phir mauzon ke toofan mein safina doob jaana rehne do!

kehte phirte ho ke hai humare dum se "roshani"
Ae bewafa ab to is dil pe haqh jatana rehne do!

kya baat hai...!

Dear Jas,

As always u've written really very well.. tou i was amongst the lucky ones to see this first...bahut accha laga tumhe padhkar... yun hi likhti raha karo....Take goood care and keeep writing...!

Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
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4th January 2006, 10:36 PM
tinke tinke se jiske aati thi bu-e-wafa kabhi
meri ulfat ka woh ujra hua aashiyaana rehne do!

kehte phirte ho ke hai humare dum se "roshani"
Ae bewafa ab to is dil pe haqh jatana rehne do!

Jasleen Ji..

Dil ko chhu lene wale ehsaas aap ne yahaaN ek khoosoorat andaaz ke saath bayaaN kiya hai.. Padhte hi ek kasak si mehsoosh hoti hai.. Aur aakhiri ke sher to bahoot hi achchhe lage.. Ham apne kismat ko to nahi badal sakte par upar wale se yahi prathana hai ki itni shakti, dherya aur himmmat de ki ham haste haste har mushkiloN ka saamna kar sakeN... Apna khayaal rakhiyegaa..

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Re: saaz-e-dil* - 5th January 2006, 08:28 AM
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Originally posted by roshani
dil ke saaz par barbaad-mohabbat ka tarana rehne do
yaadon ki phulwadiyon mei pyaar ka woh zamana rehne do!

gul kar do har chirag meri zindagi ka doston
magar unke intezaar mein aakhon ka yeh parwana rehne do!

ro-ro kar guzari hai har shab-e-furkat meine
wasl ki chaah mein woh dil ka jalana rehne do!

tinke tinke se jiske aati thi bu-e-wafa kabhi
meri ulfat ka woh ujra hua aashiyaana rehne do!

sahil-e-ulfat pe pahunchne wali thi naav-e-mohabbat
phir mauzon ke toofan mein safina doob jaana rehne do!

kehte phirte ho ke hai humare dum se "roshani"
Ae bewafa ab to is dil pe haqh jatana rehne do!

gul karna- bujha dena
shab-e-furkat-birah ki raat
wasl-milan
bu-e-wafa-prem sugandh
sahil-e-ulfat-prem kinare
naav-e-mohabbat-pyaar ki kashti
maujhein- lehrein
safeena-kashti
Roshni ji,

kya khoob likha hai aapne. bahut achha kalam pesh kiya hai aapne. tc & keep writting.


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Re: Re: saaz-e-dil* - 6th January 2006, 03:50 PM
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hi Jas,
kafi time baad dekha tumhe yahan
per waapis aayi ho ik naye kalaam ke saath
sacch bahut hi pyara likha hai tumne
yu hi likhti rehna...
dear shweta,
well der se aayi par aayi to hoon. lolz. well thx for appreciating my thoughts buddy. its gud to hv closed ones around. surely u wud find more of my creations soon. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.
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Re: roshani - 6th January 2006, 03:53 PM
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tumhere alfaz se main ek roshni to hai
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bahut uljhee baten karata hai zamana
kisee kee baat main ek sadgee to hai
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hi anil,
it was ur first reply to me n let me tell u , u can express anything so easily. best is u can just simply play with words. time kam hone ki wajah se was reading ur forwarded shayri , but must say u write really well. thx for being here with me. u liked it, my day is made. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.
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