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Yeh Sham Ki Nami Si Hai - 3rd November 2015, 04:51 PM

Kafi arse ke baad kuch likha hai. Umeed krta hoon ki aapko pasand aayega.


Yeh Sham Ki Nami Si Hai Ya Din Ka Grur Hai
Matlab Har Ek Baat Ka Hota Zrur Hai

Palken Hain Aaj Bhari Moti Liye Huye
Khamosh Hai Zubaan Bhi Yeh Kaisa Srur Hai

Jeena Yhaan Zra Sa Aur Khwahishen Badi Hain
Rookna Nahin Yhan Pr Manzil To Duur Hai

Bekaar Ki Uljhano Se Kyon Jeena Muhaal Ho
Kyon Naam Ho Kisi Aur Ka Jab Apna Kasoor Hai

Hasne Ki Iss Nqab Mey Jo Gham Ko Chipa Liya
Khud Ke Hee Aiyne Mey Woh Dikhta Zrur Hai

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3rd November 2015, 05:03 PM

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Kafi arse ke baad kuch likha hai. Umeed krta hoon ki aapko pasand aayega.


Yeh Sham Ki Nami Si Hai Ya Din Ka Grur Hai
Matlab Har Ek Baat Ka Hota Zrur Hai

Palken Hain Aaj Bhari Moti Liye Huye
Khamosh Hai Zubaan Bhi Yeh Kaisa Srur Hai

Jeena Yhaan Zra Sa Aur Khwahishen Badi Hain
Rookna Nahin Yhan Pr Manzil To Duur Hai

Bekaar Ki Uljhano Se Kyon Jeena Muhaal Ho
Kyon Naam Ho Kisi Aur Ka Jab Apna Kasoor Hai

Hasne Ki Iss Nqab Mey Jo Gham Ko Chipa Liya
Khud Ke Hee Aiyne Mey Woh Dikhta Zrur Hai

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Namaskaar jaspaal ji...maine pahli baar padha hai aapko...
kahna chahoongi ki ek arse baad bahut khoob vapasi rahi aapki....
Bahut hee achcha likha hai.....
Yun hee mahfil sajate rahiyega aage bhi......

Khush rahein...

Madhu.



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4th November 2015, 09:47 AM

Jeena Yhaan Zra Sa Aur Khwahishen Badi Hain
Rookna Nahin Yhan Pr Manzil To Duur Hai

bahut hi acchaa likhaa hai aapne.... uupar likhi panktiyaan bas lajawaab hain............

aate rahen likhte rahen.................


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4th November 2015, 04:35 PM

bahut khoob jaspal bhai............
likhte rahen
aate rahen


Aapka Apna
Ishk


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6th November 2015, 05:18 PM

Madhu ji, Sameer Ji Aur Ishk Saheb,

Aapse miley houslon ke liye aap teeno ka aur un sabhi doston ka jinhone iss Ghazal ko pda hai, bhut bhut shukriya. Achha likne ki Koshish yun hi jaari rhegi.

Diwali ki shubhkamnayen.

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