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Aadat teri padh gayi hai o jaana aisi... - 1st July 2015, 07:38 AM

Aadat teri padh gayi hai oh jaana aisi
Phoolon ko bhanvre ki hoti hai lat jaisi

Muskuraata dekhoon, mera din ban jaaye
Mohabbat main kartaa hoon ye tujhse kaisi

Yaad karoon khudaa ko to yaad too bhi aaye
Tujhko jo khushi de, dua maanguun hardam vaisi

Too jo mujhe mili hai, khuda ki rehmat hai
Varna kahaan mujhme koi khoobi tere jaisi

Door se hi sahi, takta rahoon main tujhko
Mehsoos tujhko kar ho mujhko khushi aisi


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1st July 2015, 10:18 AM

oye hoye....................

kis par itna pyaar chidak rahe ho pulkit miyaa..................

Shweta ko sunaaya kya? woh to aaj khushi se fooli nahi samaa rahi hogi.

ishq se saraabor iss kalaam ko mera salaam.

by the way ye dard section mein kar kya raha hai?

ye to mehak raha hai pyaar ke gulaabon se.


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1st July 2015, 11:37 AM

waahhh pulkit bhai..... kya abaat hai kyaa andaaz hai aur kyaa khooob ghazal huii hai ke bas padhte hi bantaa hai..... masha allaah aapke khayaalon ki parwaaz aaj bahutt uuchii lageee hame aur bas bebaaq hi ise baar baar padhne kaa mann karta rahaa......

bahut bahut daad pesh hain aapko.. aate rahen.. likhte rahiye..

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bahut pyaari rachna hai pulkit jee..............


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Muskuraata dekhoon, mera din ban jaaye
Mohabbat main kartaa hoon ye tujhse kais

bahut pyare bahut nazuk ehsaas....bahut khoob kalam pulkit jii.... likhte rahein aise hee...
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1st July 2015, 08:48 PM

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oye hoye....................

kis par itna pyaar chidak rahe ho pulkit miyaa..................

Shweta ko sunaaya kya? woh to aaj khushi se fooli nahi samaa rahi hogi.

ishq se saraabor iss kalaam ko mera salaam.

by the way ye dard section mein kar kya raha hai?

ye to mehak raha hai pyaar ke gulaabon se.
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Aapko itna pasand aaya jaankar khushi huwi... Aise hi mann me kucch chal raha thha to likh diya... Shweta ko nahin sunaaya, aise hi post kar diya thha. Aapne itni tareef kardi ke ab mujhe lagta hai use sunaa dena chaahiye.

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waahhh pulkit bhai..... kya abaat hai kyaa andaaz hai aur kyaa khooob ghazal huii hai ke bas padhte hi bantaa hai..... masha allaah aapke khayaalon ki parwaaz aaj bahutt uuchii lageee hame aur bas bebaaq hi ise baar baar padhne kaa mann karta rahaa......

bahut bahut daad pesh hain aapko.. aate rahen.. likhte rahiye..

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1st July 2015, 10:37 PM

Pulkit bhai,

You are writing beautiful poems.Cool one.Muskurata Gungunata yeh qalam bahut khoobsurat hay.Keep up the good work.

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Aadat teri padh gayi hai oh jaana aisi
Phoolon ko bhanvre ki hoti hai lat jaisi

Muskuraata dekhoon, mera din ban jaaye
Mohabbat main kartaa hoon ye tujhse kaisi

Yaad karoon khudaa ko to yaad too bhi aaye
Tujhko jo khushi de, dua maanguun hardam vaisi

Too jo mujhe mili hai, khuda ki rehmat hai
Varna kahaan mujhme koi khoobi tere jaisi

Door se hi sahi, takta rahoon main tujhko
Mehsoos tujhko kar ho mujhko khushi aisi


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1st July 2015, 10:55 PM

Pulkit Gupta ji ....bada hi romantic matla hai aapki ghazal ka

Aage aap rab ko yaad kerte haiN tau mehboob bhi yaad aata hai ..bhai subhan allah.

Manga hai tujko rab se duaon meiN kahIN .....yaar ke deedar ki bus tamanna hai dil meiN ..

Bahut ache bhai , yuN hi likhte raho .

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shaadi ke baad romantic likhna majboori ho jaati hai... waise bhagwan jaane mera kya hoga... :P Pulkit bhaiya bahut masoom se andaaz mein aapne apna ishq bayaaN kiya hai, umeed karta hun aage bhi yuNhi aapke aur rang dekhne ko milte raheNge...



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Behad dil fareb rahi aapki ye peshkash........bohot achhe....waaaaaaaah kya kahne

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You are writing beautiful poems.Cool one.Muskurata Gungunata yeh qalam bahut khoobsurat hay.Keep up the good work.

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Pulkit Gupta ji ....bada hi romantic matla hai aapki ghazal ka

Aage aap rab ko yaad kerte haiN tau mehboob bhi yaad aata hai ..bhai subhan allah.

Manga hai tujko rab se duaon meiN kahIN .....yaar ke deedar ki bus tamanna hai dil meiN ..

Bahut ache bhai , yuN hi likhte raho .

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Sanjay bhai,

Mann me jaise ehsaas aate hain vaisa likh leta hoon, aapko pasand bhai bahut accha laga... aap yun hi haunsla badhate rahen... khayal rakhen apna! Aur yeh Pulkit Gupta ji ka takalluf chhodiye, Pulkit hi kaafi hai


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shaadi ke baad romantic likhna majboori ho jaati hai... waise bhagwan jaane mera kya hoga... :P Pulkit bhaiya bahut masoom se andaaz mein aapne apna ishq bayaaN kiya hai, umeed karta hun aage bhi yuNhi aapke aur rang dekhne ko milte raheNge...
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