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Love Wo Mera Tha............... - 18th July 2004, 08:30 PM

WO MERA THA YE BATANA AJIB LAGATA HAI.
AB USASE AANKH MILANA AJIB LAGATA HAI.

BADE SHAUK SE DAWAT TO USANE BHEJI HAI,
PER USAKI BAJM ME JANA AJIB LAGATA HAI.

THA JISAKA HAATH HAMESHA HUMARE HATON ME,
AB USASE HAATH MILANA AJIB LAGATA HAI.


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19th July 2004, 01:40 AM

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originally posted by sushil sagar:

WO MERA THA YE BATANA AJIB LAGATA HAI.
AB USASE AANKH MILANA AJIB LAGATA HAI.

BADE SHAUK SE DAWAT TO USANE BHEJI HAI,
PER USAKI BAJM ME JANA AJIB LAGATA HAI.

THA JISAKA HAATH HAMESHA HUMARE HATON ME,
AB USASE HAATH MILANA AJIB LAGATA HAI.
Sushil sagar ji,

bahut achha likha hai aapne..khas kar aakhri sher to bahut achha hai..daad kubool kijiye...


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19th July 2004, 05:04 PM

fantastic!...very nice words..


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19th July 2004, 05:21 PM

Nice Words....Do Keep it up ....


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