Ik din hum mar jaayanige, shayad tab voh aayainnge>>

[shayri12345]

dosto pesh kar rahi hu dil e jasbaat ek baar phir....>>

Ik din hum maarr jayaainge
shayad tab "VOH" aayaainge,

is jahhann me na honge us waqt hum
Khushiya dekar unhe saaath le jaaynge gum,

Shhayyad us waqt Voh karainge hame yaad
Khuda se karainge fariyaad,

par hum na honge unke paas,
hoga tab shayad phir ehsaas,

Kitna pyar karte hai unse,
Kitna hum marte hai un par,

chaha tha unko dil se humney,
par kadar aaj tak na jaani unhone,,

IK DIN HUM MARR JAYAINGE,
SHAYAD TAB "VOH" AAYAIINGE,
DUNIYA ME HUMNA HONGE US WAQT HUM,
KHUSHIYA DEKE SAATH LE JAAYAINGE GUM......>>

LUV PRIYA.....>>>

[khozii]

PRIYA JI WOW this one is amazing , i love it ! beautiful lines conributed by u ! keep it up , and keep writing the same way ---->> best luck to u ............. keep smiling !

[shayri12345]

khozziiji thanks a lot for liking my posts....direct dil se hehe
luv Priya..>>>

[RICKY_DIL_SE]

dear priya ji,
that was wonderful....... isne to sidha dil ko shoo diya.... mere paas to lafaj bhi nahi hain kehne ko ke kya kahoon.... but that was mind blowing.......aise hi likhte rahiye.......take care....
something for U.........

Dil ki baat labon pe laa kar ab tak hum dukh sahte hain
Hum ne sunaa tha is duniya main dil waalay bhi rahte hain

Beeth gaya Saawan ka maheena Mausam ne nazrain badlein
Lekin in Pyaasi aankhon se ab tak aansoo behtay hain

Ek humain aawara kehna koi bada Ilzaam nahee
Duniya walay dil waalon ko aur bohat kuch kehtay hain

Jin ke khatir doast bhi choray jin ke khatir badnaam huay
Aaj wahi hum se kuch begaanay begaanay se rehtay hain....
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SANAM

[shayri12345]

thanks a lot fo r liking this one..
bahut khoob kaha hai aaapne

Dil ki baat labon pe laa kar ab tak hum dukh sahte hain
Hum ne sunaa tha is duniya main dil waalay bhi rahte hain

Beeth gaya Saawan ka maheena Mausam ne nazrain badlein
Lekin in Pyaasi aankhon se ab tak aansoo behtay hain

Ek humain aawara kehna koi bada Ilzaam nahee
Duniya walay dil waalon ko aur bohat kuch kehtay hain

Jin ke khatir doast bhi choray jin ke khatir badnaam huay
Aaj wahi hum se kuch begaanay begaanay se rehtay hain....
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i think
dil ki baat jab jab lab pe paayi
dil ne kaha hai duhayi hai duhayi
ki dekho chaar dina da pyar o rabba
phir kinni lambi judayi lambi judayi
chor diya unhone hame jinki khatir
aaj unke ehsaan se huye hum sodayii
kuch pata nahi ab hame ki kya kahe
ab bhi dil nahi karta ki kahe unhe harjaayi
kaash pyar na kiya hota unse itna
kaise ki mere ishq ne ye kamayi
ki chaar dinoo ka tha pyar o rabba
ab bari lambi judayi lambi judayi

luv Priya..>>

[khozii]

hi !
after soo many rears read ur post again , fir de dil roo pada , aaj fir jazbaat jaag uthe ....
amazing .

[roshani]

hi priya,
tht moment i read the title ,i was shocked. i was wondering wats wrong with u. then wen i read in whole , i was feeling like killing u. lolz reason i thought hw cud u write so. sumhow i thought i wont reply here as i was not happy with wat u wrote.sunddenly my mind clicked tht let me read wen did u posted it n i just cudnt control my laughter any more. lolzzzz. neways ur creations are as wonderful as u r n loved reading it as it made me laugh today hell. reason u can make out very well. madam a humble request keep posting sumthing. these days u all r lost in ur hectic shedhules. so plz do take out time for us too. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.
with love
urs jas

[kuhulika]

hi Priya,
hmm direct dil se...
accha likha hai

[Rohin]

Nice...