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Aapse milkar -
5th May 2004, 03:52 PM
Apse milkar, khuda ki ibabat bhool gye hum
apki adaye dekh, apni har adat bhool gaye hum
ye kaisa jadu kiya hai apne humper
apko chahkar, duniya ki har chaht bhool gaye hum
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5th May 2004, 04:12 PM
Hi,
Pretty nice words... Keep it Up.
Kanto se Daman Bachana bhool gaye
Hum Raat ko Shama jalana bhool gaye
Taa Umra Karte rahe bandagi teri,
Hum khuda ke ghal par ana jana bhool gaye
Take Care n Do keep writing
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
Last edited by Pulkit_gupta; 5th May 2004 at 04:15 PM..
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6th May 2004, 12:37 PM
bahut kuch badal gaya hai,
rangeen ho gaya hai meri zindagi ka har rang
jabse ahsas hone laga hai
ki meri yadon mein hai har pal VO mere sang
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6th May 2004, 01:15 PM
Ho gayi hai mashoor bewafai kuch is kadar unki,
Zikar aaya mera mehfil main to jhuk gayi nazar unki.
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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6th May 2004, 02:31 PM
yuin chorkar chale gaye tum humein
tumpe to hum ye dunia var dete
ek bar gar jo murkar bhi dekha hota
to tumahri yad mein jindagi gujar dete
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6th May 2004, 02:51 PM
judaa_ii ho ke milan har adaa hamaarii hai
tumhaaraa shahar hai lekin fizaa hamaarii hai
shikaayate.n bhii kare.n ham to kis zabaan se kare.n
Khudaa banaayaa ham ne ye Khataa hamaarii hai
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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6th May 2004, 03:42 PM
Aise addao mein ahsas hai bahut
jisme din rat badal jate hain
aise mein kisi ke pal pal ke bnaye hue
pyar ke khyalat badal jate hain.
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6th May 2004, 03:55 PM
Good One
baat karani mujhe mushkil kabhi aisi to na thi
jaisi ab hai teri mahafil kabhi aisi to na thi
le gayaa chhin ke kaun aaj teraa sabr-o-qarar
beqaraari tujhe ai dil kabhi aisi to na thi...
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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nice.....!!! -
6th May 2004, 04:15 PM
hi shruts......!!!
well i must say u have posted some of the amazing shayris...
and that too very short and in simple words to felt the
charm of small but meaning full words....!!!
i think u r new in this shari.com any wayz keep writing...!!!
be!maan mohabbat.....!!!
Sal!m.....!!!
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7th May 2004, 02:31 PM
thanx for nice responses.
yeh i m new to shayri.com and hoping to be long last with it.
Tum to hamesha se meri mahfil ki shaan the
tumse to mere jure hue sare armaan the
kyuin na pahchan paye tum apne pyar ko
kyuin tum jankar bhi is ahasa se anjaan the
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11th May 2004, 11:47 AM
.....chup rahne mein nahi mja
per isme bhi hamari mazbori hai
mazboori bhi kisi ko kya sunaye
apni to ye kahani hi adhoori hai
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12th May 2004, 04:07 PM
gam insaan ki sabse badi tanhai hai
maut zindagi ki sabse bari sachai hai
...jise aaj tak koi na jan paya
..vo ek aurat ke dil ki gaharai hai
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12th May 2004, 09:16 PM
hi shruti............
yar amazing simply amazing.....i dnt have words to describe
even i have posted many shayris bt i was nt satisfied bt the
thing i ever wanted to have is indepth.........i have seen them
in ur words.....!!!
Tum to hamesha se meri mahfil ki shaan the
tumse to mere jure hue sare armaan the
kyuin na pahchan paye tum apne pyar ko
kyuin tum jankar bhi is ahasa se anjaan the..!!1
lovely words........keep writng....!!!
ishq ke rishtey bhi kitne ajib hote hai
dur rehkar bhi kitne kareeb hote hai
meri barbadi par afsos mat karna ae dost
pyar mein sabke apne apne nasib hote hain....!!
be!maan mohabbat.....!!!
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HI Shruti Ji!! -
13th May 2004, 09:56 AM
Hi Dear !
Kaisi Ho??
tumne bahut sahi likha hai ki aurat ke dil ki gehrai ko koi nahi jaan sakta. Agar Jaan sakta to aaj bahut se shayar Hote hi naa.
Insaan ko banaane mein aur bigadne mein ek aurat ka haath hota hai. Hai naa??
Baki kya kahun..? You know much about me..
So bye for now and take care...............
yours 
----Gumnam
Take care to get what you like,
Or you will be forced to like what you get.
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17th May 2004, 06:43 PM
.........yuin to ham bahut khushnasib hain
..............................par rishto ne hame mar dala
yuin to ham unke dosto mein sabse karib hain
fir bhi Apni hi khushion ka hamne unhe shagun ka Har dala
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hi -
18th May 2004, 02:09 PM
hi anushka........
yar amazing imagination the pic u have attached is really
heavenly.........and words do match the situation...!!!
any wayz i have gt a private msg frm ur side and u have written
something bt i dnt know wats tht for?
do send me tht msg again...!!!
be!maan mohabbat.....!!!
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18th May 2004, 04:50 PM
Hi....
i dint get....who is anushka?
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hi -
19th May 2004, 02:31 PM
hi shruts
i m very sorry yar yesterday when i was giving some1 reply i
have mistakely posted tht msg in ur page....!!!
Any wayz shruts u have been uptil nw at ur best and ur shayris
are almost to my likings and ya shruts do tell me more abt u n
ya do tell me more abt u........!!!
shruts do post shayris as usual and ya do give me ur mail
adress.....!!!
inspired_humour@yahoo.com
be!maan mohabbat.....!!!
Sal!m.....!!!
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26th May 2004, 09:29 AM
i am a software professional...coudnt get much time to update my shayri's......
is mausam ki barish mein aaj bah jaye ham
jane do hame kaise office mein rah jaye ham
jo nahi kha kabhi hamne....kisi se......
shayad is barish mein aaj unse kah jaye ham
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26th May 2004, 03:53 PM
kya sher likha hai
waise aap badi acchi shayri likhati hai
aaise hi likhate rahiyega yahi dua
keep it going
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8th June 2004, 10:20 AM
kisi aur ki kya bat kare, chahna to ham bhool hi gaye hain.
katein to hamne rakhe hain, Aapke hisse mein to fool hi gaye hain
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2nd July 2004, 02:24 PM
Kya kahein kya na kahein
intzar pe intzar kaise sahein
kitna vaqt hua Aapko dekhe hue
Aapko dekhe bina ab kaise rahein
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17th October 2004, 11:18 PM
Pani ki barsaat to hamesha hoti the.....
..........Aaj Patto ki barsaat ho rahi
sabke pyar ki batein sunte the ham.........
Aaj tumahre aur hamare pyaar ki baat ho rahi hai.....
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