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Love gaeaa koeey - 4th April 2016, 01:18 AM


aarzoo ka ghuncha khilaa gaeaa koeey
mujh ko to mujh se hi churaa gaeaa koeey

piaar ke chnd lamhay sonp kr mujhey
aag kasee dil main lagaa gaeaa koeey

main ny rakhna chaha tha piaar ka bharum
tor k naate sab kuch bhulaa gaeaa koeey

jin se roshan thee zindagee maree wohee
piar ke diyeey sab bujhaa gaeaa koeey

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4th April 2016, 09:04 AM

waahh bahut khoob saba ji............

bahut achchi peshkash likhti rahiye.........



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4th April 2016, 09:24 AM

Bhot acha likha hai.. Aapne saba ji... bhot khub..
Guzaar Nahi Pate The Kabhi Ek Lamha Bhi Akele..
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4th April 2016, 12:26 PM

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aarzoo ka ghuncha khilaa gaeaa koeey
mujh ko to mujh se hi churaa gaeaa koeey

piaar ke chnd lamhay sonp kr mujhey
aag kasee dil main lagaa gaeaa koeey

main ny rakhna chaha tha piaar ka bharum
tor k naate sab kuch bhulaa gaeaa koeey

jin se roshan thee zindagee maree wohee
piar ke diyeey sab bujhaa gaeaa koeey

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Dil ko chu gaya

Chaar misrey aapko mansoob karta hu

Shadaab ho gaya gulshan bhi mera
Teri buu se mehka daman bhi mera

Kis samt aakhir ja raha hai aye saba
Muntazir hai aakhir sahan bhi mera

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4th April 2016, 01:53 PM

buhet shukria madhu ji............
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4th April 2016, 01:55 PM

buhet shukri,aa azaz saheb .....
buhet ach,aa sheir share kia aa,ap nay shukria


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Bhot acha likha hai.. Aapne saba ji... bhot khub..
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Umrr Bhar Tanha Rehne Ka Sabak Sikhaa Gaya Koiee..


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buhet hukri,aa mujahid saheb aa,p kaa mai to yu hi likhti hu aa,p jaise manjha na khyal h na ilm
pher b buhet shukria saheb
vaa buhet ach,aa qita aa,p n likhaa buhet khub au,r bhet shukri,aa
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Wallah
Kitni saadgi se apna haal-e-dil ko bayaan kiya saba sahiba

Dil ko chu gaya

Chaar misrey aapko mansoob karta hu

Shadaab ho gaya gulshan bhi mera
Teri buu se mehka daman bhi mera

Kis samt aakhir ja raha hai aye saba
Muntazir hai aakhir sahan bhi mera

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6th April 2016, 08:08 PM

bahut hi ummdah peshkash saba saahiba............ behad masoom sa kalaam laga aapkaa aur padh kar behad lutf milaa.... likhti rahiye....... khush rahiye.........

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6th April 2016, 09:51 PM

buhet shukria shaad jii........

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bahut hi ummdah peshkash saba saahiba............ behad masoom sa kalaam laga aapkaa aur padh kar behad lutf milaa.... likhti rahiye....... khush rahiye.........

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7th April 2016, 10:49 PM

Sabaa ji

Behad khoobsurat kalam pesh kiya aapne....yoon hi likhti rahen..khush rahe...duao k sath

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10th April 2016, 09:53 AM

Kya baat hai saba jee...dil jeet liya aapne is shayri se...daad qubool karein...



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22nd April 2016, 10:13 PM

Hello Sabaa

Dil ko chuu gayi tumhari rachna...dil se daad kabul karna

Pyar ke badle mein pyar mile
Pyar mein yeh zaroori to nahin

Bugh gaya diya jo pyar mein
Na ho sake roshan yeh zaroori to nahin

Zindagi roshan hoti hay muskurane se
Gum mein doob zindagi jeena zaroori to nahin

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aarzoo ka ghuncha khilaa gaeaa koeey
mujh ko to mujh se hi churaa gaeaa koeey

piaar ke chnd lamhay sonp kr mujhey
aag kasee dil main lagaa gaeaa koeey

main ny rakhna chaha tha piaar ka bharum
tor k naate sab kuch bhulaa gaeaa koeey

jin se roshan thee zindagee maree wohee
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