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1st November 2006, 07:16 PM
Dear Friends Ek baar fir se apki is mahfil main aaya hun kuchh likha tha to socha yanha bhi post kar dun apne doston ke parkhne ke liye agar koshish pasand aaye to mujhe bata kar mera hosla badaiyega Muskurane kee koshish bahut kee magar.. Aankh hee aansuon ko chhupa na saki ! Teri ulfat thee ek gajal kee tarah .. Jindgi wo gajal gunguna na saki ! Dil main yun hai basa aaj bhi tu mere Saans bhi har meri tujhko awaaj de Maine chaha to tha bahut par sanam Dil kee dhadkan tujhe bhula na saki ! Unse bichda to mujhko yun tha laga Jaise ab jindgi kee jarurat nahi Wo gaye is kadar chhod kar ke mujhe Koi awaaz unko bula na saki ! Chand alfaazon ke aasre the ‘Anish’ Wo bhi sunana unhe gawara na tha Mere jis gam se har aankh bhar aai thee Unke maathe pe salwat bhi laa na saki ! Aapka apna dost tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to ye haq hai tumko ! meri baat or hai maine to mohobbat kee hai !! :) anish.paliwal@gmail.com:) |
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1st November 2006, 07:20 PM
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aapko aaj bahot dino baaad padha maine padhke peshkas aapki bahot hi achha laga kya asaar k sath aapne likha hai wah!!!! saar bahot hi badhiyan hai isse peshkas aur nikahrti hai aur ye dusra sher mujhe bahot pasand aaya Dil main yun hai basa aaj bhi tu mere Saans bhi har meri tujhko awaaj de Maine chaha to tha bahut par sanam Dil kee dhadkan tujhe bhula na saki ! bahot khub!!!!!! dil se nikali daad kubul kijiyenga janab aapka dost dhaval |
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2nd November 2006, 03:52 AM
aapne bahoot hi acha likh hai anishji
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2nd November 2006, 03:52 AM
anish ji main aapki dil se bahut izzat karta hoon, jab aapka likha kuch dikhta hoon use jaroor padhta hoon.is baar v aapne ahcha likha hai.par yakeen maaniye aapne isse pehle itni ahchi posts padha di hain hume ki unke saamne ye thodi adni si lag rahi hai.plz burz mat maan.na aapki agli peshkash ka intezaar raha hai...!
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2nd November 2006, 04:36 PM
dear dhaval jee
aapko mera likha achha laga iske liye mujhe dil se khushi hai halanki ab main gajal nahi likh pata likhne ka time bhi nahi milta or alfaaj bhi nahi milte par kabhi kabhi jab kuchh dil main machalta hai to likh diya karta hun aapne is rachna ko padha yahi bahut tha uske bad aapne iske reply ke liye waqt nikala iske liye shukrguzar hun main aapka aap sabhi kee daad milti hain to dil ko sakoon milta hai thanks again for your reply take care tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to ye haq hai tumko ! meri baat or hai maine to mohobbat kee hai !! :) anish.paliwal@gmail.com:) |
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2nd November 2006, 04:37 PM
dear sandhya jee
khushi hui kee aapko bhi meri rachna achhi lagi or aapne reply bhejne ke liye waqt nikala dil se shukriya kabool kijiye aapka anjaan par jaana pahchana dost tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to ye haq hai tumko ! meri baat or hai maine to mohobbat kee hai !! :) anish.paliwal@gmail.com:) |
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2nd November 2006, 04:39 PM
dear ghayal shayar jee
aap hamesha hee meri rachnao ko sarahte hain mujhe hosla dete hain baat rahi bura manane kee to wo main kaise manu kyunki aapne jo kaha wo meri rachna kee tohin nahi balki uski chamak main or ijaafa karne ke liye dee gai ek nasihat hai main manta hun dil se manta hun ke ab shayad main achha nahi likh pata ek baar maine manoj jee se jo baat kahi thee aapse kahta hun gajal likhne ke liye jo nami chahiye hoti hai wo ab mujhme nahi rahi sach kahun to gajal tabhi asardaar hoti hai jab dard dil main chubhe or itna asar paida kare kee wo khud ba khud lafjo ko ijaad kare khair main koshish karunga ke main achha likh paun or aap doston ko bahtar suna paun aapne jo sachai kahi uske liye dil se aapka shukriya ada karta hun achha laga ke koi aisa dost bhi hai jo meri achhaiyan nahi meri buraiyan bhi bata sakta hai aap sabhi doston ko pura haq hai ke agar meri rachna main asar na mile to mujhe khul kar bataiye dost to wahi jo hamari kamiyon ko kam kare sapno ko jode dukho ko ghata de or khushiyon ko guna kare hai na ok take care bye and thanks again tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to ye haq hai tumko ! meri baat or hai maine to mohobbat kee hai !! :) anish.paliwal@gmail.com:) |
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