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$ mainey kitni baar hai socha.. $ - 25th October 2011, 05:06 PM
Hi All.
Well, Introduction of mine... "kuch khaas nahi hai"..so leave it.

This is my first composition in meter which someone had taught me (with lots of scolding coz m a great slacker ).. You can get his name in my composition also .. and i know he is a well known person here and blessed with creative mind.. I am extremely thankful to him for teaching me something which is very close to his heart and specially thankful because he kept patience ( well not always ) with my slow learning and moody behavior.. Thanks a lot 'Vikas' for this.. I will always treasure this knowledge...


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mainey kitni baar hai socha..
soch tu usko mat sochaa kar..

usasey bichad ke sochaa dil ne..
kab kyu kaisey kya socha kar


honey laga hai ab to awaara
chand tu ghar bhi lauta kar.


'fikr' ye rishte dil ke hai sab..
sharto me mat bandha kar


kahta rahta hai bas apni
meri bhi to mana kar

mainey taare kab maangey hain..
'fikr ' pakad jugnu laaya kar


maana tu hai baba gyaani..
mujhko bhi kam na jaana kar


mainey usko bhula diya hai..
kehta to hai.. bhoola bhi kar..




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25th October 2011, 07:15 PM
hahaha.... welcome to SDC shweta jee.... aapne itnaa accha likhaaa hai aap delete hi kyoN karnaaa chaahti ho ise....

Well if you really want to delete this... send Personal Message to any of the Moderators (preferably zainy, dhaval or sunita dee) send them that you want to delete this.... NO other way.. sorry

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25th October 2011, 07:15 PM
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how to delete post here..??? help
why do you want to delete?

its a good post.

aapne tecnic to seekh hi li hai....ab sher banaii....its a very good start.

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hahaha.... welcome to SDC shweta jee.... aapne itnaa accha likhaaa hai aap delete hi kyoN karnaaa chaahti ho ise....

Well if you really want to delete this... send Personal Message to any of the Moderators (preferably zainy, dhaval or sunita dee) send them that you want to delete this.... NO other way.. sorry
Thanks a lot .. i don't want to delete.. jus wanna modify it.. but i think there is no control in the hand of thread owner... so sad..
   
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hahaha.... welcome to SDC shweta jee.... aapne itnaa accha likhaaa hai aap delete hi kyoN karnaaa chaahti ho ise....

Well if you really want to delete this... send Personal Message to any of the Moderators (preferably zainy, dhaval or sunita dee) send them that you want to delete this.... NO other way.. sorry
thanks a ton for your appreciation...

jus wanted to modify .. so that .. hmmmm... so that it can come in meter... there is still places to make it perfect...
   
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25th October 2011, 07:33 PM
Welcome to SDC Shweta ji.......

Bohat khoobsurat ghazal hai...Appreciate your effort...

Bataiye kya edit karna hai...hum kar denge.......



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Welcome to SDC Shweta ji.......

Bohat khoobsurat ghazal hai...Appreciate your effort...

Bataiye kya edit karna hai...hum kar denge.......
Thank You Zainy....

wow.. you can do changes in it.. great... i'll send changes to you...
   
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Welcome To SDC Shweta Ji ... !

AchChhii Soch .... Umdaa KhayaaL ... !

KhoobsuraT Koshish ... Dilee Daad-O-Mubaaraqbaad ... !!!

Aate RaheN Aur Likhte RaheN Aage Bhii ... Khush RaheN ... !



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thank you zainy....

Wow.. You can do changes in it.. Great... I'll send changes to you...


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Hi All.
Well, Introduction of mine... "kuch khaas nahi hai"..so leave it.

This is my first composition in meter which someone had taught me (with lots of scolding coz m a great slacker ).. You can get his name in my composition also .. and i know he is a well known person here and blessed with creative mind.. I am extremely thankful to him for teaching me something which is very close to his heart and specially thankful because he kept patience ( well not always ) with my slow learning and moody behavior.. Thanks a lot 'Vikas' for this.. I will always treasure this knowledge...


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mainey kitni baar hai socha..
soch tu usko mat sochaa kar..

usasey bichad ke sochaa dil ne..
kab kyu kaisey kya socha kar


honey laga hai ab to awaara
chand tu ghar bhi lauta kar.


'fikr' ye rishte dil ke hai sab..
sharto me mat bandha kar


kahta rahta hai bas apni
meri bhi to mana kar

mainey taare kab maangey hain..
'fikr ' pakad jugnu laaya kar


maana tu hai baba gyaani..
mujhko bhi kam na jaana kar


mainey usko bhula diya hai..
kehta to hai.. bhoola bhi kar..
welcome here .......... so finally u r hare

this may be ur very first thread or post in SDc but ..... I know (as u have told me) you are very old member(unregistered) or reader of sdc ........
so keep coming here , share or writing .. thought....... or anything ........
god bless u .....
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