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30th April 2005, 07:21 PM
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I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine} 
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30th April 2005, 08:10 PM
Tum Mere Baare Me Sochti To Hogi
Raat Bhar Karwatein Badalti To Hogi Le Kar Anchal Hath Me Aksar Haya Se Dolti Toh Hogi Baloon Ke Gajre Le Kar Kabhi Khushboo Mohabat Ki Sunghti To Hongi Teri Nazre Bhi Mujhe Aksar Idhar Udhar Dhondhti To Hongi Waaaahh... This is so simple yet so good... acchi shuruaat hai!! Chehre Par Tere Sun Kar Mera Naam Hamesha Muskan Failti To Hogi Kabhi Kabhi Lekar Mera Naam Khwaboon Main Bolti To Hogi God One!! Mujhr Dekh Kar Kabhi Kabhi Nazrain Jhuka Kar Utahti To Hogi Meri Tasveer Seene Se Laga Kar Mohabaat Se Itrati To Hogi Payal Pehan Kar Kabhi Dheeme Dheeme Kadam Uthati To Hogi Sawan Ke Mausam Me Bhi To Ghata Si Zulf Lehrati To Hogi WaaaaH.. these lines r the best till now... 2 good!! Mere Khwaboon Me Bhi Kabhi Deep Wafa Ke Le Kar Aati Tu Hogi Tum Merey Bare Main Sochti To Hogi Raat Bhar Karwatein Badalti To Hogi Very Nice!! Dea Jubin! Tumhari yeh rachna bhi mujhe bahut pasand aayi.. kam shabdon me ehsaas bayaan karna bahut mushkil hai jo ki tumne yaha kiya hai.. meri daad kubool kar lena dost.. do keep it up!! Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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1st May 2005, 10:02 AM
pulkit sir aap aayeaur hamari rachna padhi hame behadh khushi hui
aapki daad paakar dil ko tasalli mili thanks for the compliments thanks a lot I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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1st May 2005, 10:17 AM
Bojheen saanson ka bhari hai bahut
ho gaya mushkil uthana kia bataun Us shahar ki us gali main woh makan tha us main tha kis ka thikana kia bataun Band khidki ke pare baarish ki bundein sard raaton main shama ka timtimana kia bataun Woh parinde jo kabhi udte the meelon un ka pinjare main fadfadana kia bataun Karwatein badalte hum yahan par chain se soye zamaana kia bataun Us ki khushion ke naghmein us ko hi mubaarak main yahan gham ka fasana kia bataun Ab kisi nazuk haseena se naa batlaunga kabhi mera ishq kar na de us ko deewaana kia bataun.......................... leave, But not our hearts. |
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(#45)
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1st May 2005, 12:06 PM
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kya khoob likha hai ashger sahab thanks for sharing this legend I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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3rd May 2005, 07:44 AM
WHEN I AM YOUR : KAREEB
THERE IS ONLY : KHAMOSHI I WANT TO SPEAK : DIL SE THAT'S MY KIND OF : ISHQ I WANT THIS TO BE : GUPT AS I ALWAYS HAVE : DARR THAT I WILL LOOSE YOU : SAJANI AND THAT WOULD BE GREAT : SADMA I AM YOUR : MR.AASHIQUE BUT SOMETIMES BIT : DEEWANA TELL ME : HUM AAPKE HAIN KAUN AS I FEEL : KUCH KUCH HOTA HAI IN THIS : DUNIYA DILWALON KI I TOLD YOU : MAINE PYAR KIYA MAY BE : DIL TO PAGAL HAI BECAUSE : JAB PYAR KISISE HOTA HAI THE WHOLE WORLD APPEARS AS : DUSHMAN BUT ANYWAY : PYAR TO HONA HI THA BUT U MUST KNOW: PYAAR KOI KHEL NAHI BUT IF U WANT 2 BECOME : DULHAN DILWALE KI THEN U MUST RESPOND 2 THIS : PUKAAR N DONT MIND COZ THIS IS MY: STYLE I HOPE YOUR ANSWER IS : YES BOSS N IF U SAY NO THEN I KNOW LIFE IS: KABHI KHUSHI KABHI GHAM I DONT KNOW WHAT WILL B MY: ANJAAM not mine............ I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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3rd May 2005, 07:52 PM
Jubin saahab...aksar yahi soch hoti hai ...jab hame saamne waale ki soch ka pata na ho.....ke wo kya karti hogi...
Bilkul...koi bhi insaan yahi soch sakta hai... per haaN aapki rachna ko sunkar puraana Rafi saahab ka ek geet yaad aa gaya...jo mera favorite hai.... film shankar husain se......lyrics...I think Kaifi Azmi. KaheeN ek maasoom naazuk si ladki bahut khoobsoorat magar saaNwli si meri dhun me kuchh gungunaati to hogi... (meine ye song post kiya hi ..per mil nahi raha ...) parhiyega kaafi similar hai aaki is post se. YooNhi likhte rahiyega... Chaand Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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3rd May 2005, 09:39 PM
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main aapka gaana zaroor padhunga aapka-jubin padhte rahiyega I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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4th May 2005, 01:08 AM
HI zubin,
Bahut Hi acha likha hai apne....sach main kahan kho gayi mujhe pata hi nahi chala... Regards Nidhi Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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4th May 2005, 09:38 AM
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kaha ho itne dino se koi khabar nahi thanks for the compliments mujhe khushi hai ki main apne shabdo ko aapke jazbaat ke saath relate kar paya keeeeeeeep reading thanks aapka-jubin I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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4th May 2005, 01:14 PM
Hi Dear,
Sachmuch Bhai aapki shayri ka to jawaab nahin.......... Bilkul Laajawaab kar diya.... Aise hi likhte rehna dost.... Ajmal Tumne Chaha hi nahin Chahne Walon ki Tarha... |
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4th May 2005, 02:19 PM
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thanks for the compliments padhte rehna mere jazbaat samjhne ke liye shukriya I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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5th May 2005, 08:39 PM
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hello.... maine baaki ke padhe nahi but ye bahut acha laga... thanks for sharing.... |
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5th May 2005, 09:56 PM
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priyanka ji thanks its my pleasure dear I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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5th May 2005, 11:30 PM
bahut khoob likha hain aapne ne "Tum mere baare me sochti to hogi..." dard ji (sorry aap ka naam nahi jaante)....
"To meet and part is the way of life, But to part and meet is the HOPE of life" ~Lovesnows~ |
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6th May 2005, 02:03 AM
Hello Snowy
Well dard ji ka nam hum bata dete hain apko unka naam hai Zubin Ate rahiyega Regards Nidhi Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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6th May 2005, 09:36 AM
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arre bhai ham bhi aapka naam kaha jaante hai  thanks again I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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6th May 2005, 09:38 AM
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thanks 4 the reply on my behalf nice to have u here aap bhi aate rahiyega I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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6th May 2005, 11:14 AM
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unforgetable simran ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Ju PaL mIlE uSs PaL kO jEe lO sHaYaD kAl Ho Na Ho...... love is seeing yourself in someone's eyes and finding yourself in somebody's heart!!!!!(*-*) (¨`·.·´¨) Always `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ ITS STATE OF MIND..... |
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6th May 2005, 11:38 AM
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I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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6th May 2005, 11:47 AM
wow....bahot accha likha hai......
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6th May 2005, 11:51 AM
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aapka saath raha to zaroor likhenge I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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6th May 2005, 12:37 PM
Masha Allah kiya likha hai bahut khoob
lagtha hai jaise dil ke sare arman aur jazbat mela ke rekh deya ho I really like it, its marvellous Kaisey Kahdey Ki Yeh Dil Deewana Nahi Hai Tanha Hai Magar Awara Nahi Hai |
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6th May 2005, 01:15 PM
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thanks a lot for the compliemts ham to bas dil ka haal bayaan karte hai log wah wah karte hai thnaks I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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