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tumhe dhoonda karte the jin tanhaiyon mein kabhi,hum khud unhi tanhaiyon mein goom ho |
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tumhe dhoonda karte the jin tanhaiyon mein kabhi,hum khud unhi tanhaiyon mein goom ho -
16th July 2003, 02:23 AM
yaadon mein teri humne khudko mita diya
apne hi haathon apna jahaan luta diya is maikasheen ki aag mein jhonka hai khudko yun ke bemuravvat jaan ko jism se hata diya maujood the jahaan mein ab marhoom ho gaye hain tumhe dhoonda karte the jin tanhaiyon mein kabhi,hum khud unhi tanhaiyon mein goom ho gaye hain bye parneet   ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- hamesha muskurate raho phoolon ki tarahan |
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16th July 2003, 02:49 AM
Thats an another good shot..
Maine to aapko anari samjh liya tha magar aap to pakke khiladi nikle.....this one is really very nice.... keep writing.. pari |
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16th July 2003, 02:59 AM
HEY THIS ONE IS NOT WRITEN BY ME .YE KISIS AUR KA LIKHA HAI .IDON'T KNOW WHO I JUST FOUND ON NET.PHIR BHI TAREEF KE LIYE SHUKRIA
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mein shayar to nahi -
16th July 2003, 03:17 PM
hi punnu
helo bhahut shandaar likha appne esi traha likhte raho just keep it up ok bye bye |
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17th July 2003, 11:26 AM
hi chetan ji. shukria tareef ke liye.ap bhi bahut acha likhte hain
bye punnu |
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hi -
17th July 2003, 12:57 PM
HI PUNNU
ACTUALLY NA JO LOG KHUD ACHHE HOTE HAIN UNKI BAATEIN BHI ACHHI HOTI HAIN AB BAAR BAAR MERE KO WORDING NAHI MILTI KI AAPKE SHAYERS KO KAISE PRAISE KARU FILHAAL TO AAPKO SIRF WAAH WAAH SE KAAM CHLAANA PADEGA BYE AUR HAA PARNEET JI KDE SANU VI YAAD KAR LYA KARO |
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17th July 2003, 03:01 PM
Punnu ji,
behad khoobsuarti se aapne apane alfaaz bayaan kiye hain. mujhe pasand aaya. meri mubarakbaad kabul kere es khubsurat kallam ke liye. eski yah line to bahoot pasand aayi mujhe. yaadon mein teri humne khudko mita diya apne hi haathon apna jahaan luta diya is maikasheen ki aag mein jhonka hai khudko yun ke bemuravvat jaan ko jism se hata diya Akant... आहट सी कोई आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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21st July 2003, 05:22 AM
sorry for late reply actually school start ho gaye hain to busy hoon isliye aj school se reply kar rahi hoon. shukria neri tareef karne ka .ke main achi hoon. agar tumhe words nahin milte to sirf waah waah hi keh diya karo main samjh jaaungi ke tumhe acha laga.ok.aur haan tumne apni DHADKAN post ka jawab nahin diya kya baat ho gayi meri baat achi nahin tumhe?batana jaroor ok gotta go.aur haan plzz mujhe parneet ji mat kaho.khali parneet bhi chalega .chalega kya dhodega .sachi
are hum to apko yaad karte hain shayad ap hi nahin karte .ok chalti hoon net time bateein karnge punnu |
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21st July 2003, 05:25 AM
hi akant ji sorry late reply karne ke liye .ji apko pasand aya ye likha hua bahut khushi hui ye jaan kar .yeh humne nahin likha hai .par ye bhi nahin janti kisne likha hai .net par mila hume.ji apki mubarak baad humne kabool karli hai.shukria tareef ke liye.
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