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karte hain - 28th December 2005, 06:27 AM

Isharon,kinayon se pyar karte hain

kagazi phoolon se bahar karte hain

inventry ashiqo ki lee nahin kabhi

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gazal - 7th January 2006, 04:33 AM

Daste dua ho jayega

beemar tera dekhke daste dua ho jayega .
Tera yahan aekbar ka ana dava ho jayega .

Dilki ye kishkol to hamne kabhi kholi nahin
Koi de ya na de hamein sabka bhala ho jayega .

Phool ,patthar,kante ho ya ho bijliyonka khiraj
Jo bhi girega ish nasheman per hava ho jayega .

Yoon isharo aur kinayo mein kahoge kabtak
Jo jaban se apni keh do ge to kya ho jayega .

Loot le jao yahanse phool,patti.shakho,phal
Ye chaman ab kuch dinomein viran ho jayega .

Bana phirta he ye phiron aur shaddad ka beta
Khuda wahid ko chhor kar kya khuda ho jayega .?

Sham ke kandho pe roya khoon ke ansu suraj
Barbadyon ki rat ayegi tabah ho jayega .

Hamne “Wafa” waqt ki rassi kabhi thami nahin
Kuch bhi kahenge jamanese gilaa ho jayega .

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Hindi gazal - 8th January 2006, 05:48 AM

Please read hindi gazal
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QATAA - 8th January 2006, 06:14 AM

Kar dali

Hooi jo neend mein pavend to khwab kar dali.

Tapak gai ankh se phoolonke sharab kar dali .


Qafase dilme jo apke thahre ham chand lamhe

Hayate qarvan ki reg ko shadab kar dali.
   
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sigrate - 9th January 2006, 04:53 PM

mehbooba se achhi to yeh sigrate hai,
hotho ke pass to ayegi,
thoda sa dil jalayegi,
par dil tod ke to na jayegi,
jis din mehbooba hotho ke pass ayegi,
yeh sigrate to apne aap chhoot jayegi.
   
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Re: sigrate - 10th January 2006, 02:25 AM

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Originally posted by manish_jhs
mehbooba se achhi to yeh sigrate hai,
hotho ke pass to ayegi,
thoda sa dil jalayegi,
par dil tod ke to na jayegi,
jis din mehbooba hotho ke pass ayegi,
yeh sigrate to apne aap chhoot jayegi.

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Maji ki diwar - 13th January 2006, 09:53 AM

Majiki diwar
Is sal bhi aa gai dekho machalti ye bahar
Aur phool mere angno mein the wo bhi pharar

Chandni barsi magar gesu-e shab tariq hai
Shayad laga usko grahan teri zulfonka ae yar

Aek dastak aegi tere dar par han jaroor
rah mein palkein bichhakar kar lena intezar

ae waqt to ret ka teela hai phaila hua
aek ah mein piglega ye banjaega teri mazar

dhoonta hun mein wafa khoi hooi meerat ko
Torta hun me isliye dhoon dhoon ke maji diwar

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KARLE - 14th January 2006, 03:05 PM

KARLE

Chalo ish ishq mein kuchh kam ham bant kar kalre
afooh karte rahna tum gareban chak ham karle

Pakao tum korma kofta ,biryani aur jarda
hman ko bulaye hum aur isko saf ham karle.

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KARLE - 14th January 2006, 03:08 PM

KARLE
Chalo ae ishq mein kuchh kam ham bant kar kalre
Rafooh karte rahna tum gareban chak ham karle

Pakao tum korma kofta ,biryani aur jarda
Mahman ko bulaye hum aur isko saf ham karle.

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Rok kar dekho - 15th January 2006, 09:02 AM

ROK KAR DEKHO

Teer aur talvar ko rok kar dekho.
Ishq ke beemar ko rok kar dekho.

Jal jayega aehsas ka ful ye tera
Jajbat ke koi tar ko rokkar dekho.

Ja kar milegi khwab ke saye tale
Koi kisike yar ko rok kar dekho.

Jalti rahegi abke chashmo tale sada
Ishq ke angar ko rok kar dekho.

Khamoshiye lab ko majboori na samajna
Khoon ki pookar ko rok kar dekho.

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Ayena hai ye ayena - 16th January 2006, 12:44 AM

AYENA HUN MEIN AYENA
Ganjinae asrar hun ayena hun nein ayena .
Markaze izhar hun ayena hun mein ayena

Tu tuta to zarf tera tut kar reh jayega
Tutkar sarsar hun ayena hun mein ayena.

Koi hizabonme nahin aya hamare samne
Sabka razdar hun ayena hun mein ayena

Amli hamamonme barhinae rahe sab neko-bud
Jalvae kirdar hun ayena hun mein ayena

Kufla ka pehra lagaya goyai per rat din
Sabka rafike yarhun ayena hun mein ayena

Aqsa tera dekhkar kyon tu tarpa Wafa
Mein tera beemar hun ayena hun mein ayena














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mini gazal - 18th January 2006, 07:06 AM

Rusva kar diya

Bus rafiqone hame aaj rusva kar diya
Jantethe na jise ausko janan kar diya.

Jis raste se kabhi gujra nahin ye karvan
Aus raste ki khaq ka ah sauda kar diya


Lutne wale the hamein jo moqa dekh kar
Aus jalimko hamare dil me mehma kardiya.

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qataa - 19th January 2006, 02:58 AM

Danda shikan

Har bat ka aunka jawab bhi danda shikan
Neend kya cheej khwab bhi danda shikan

Toote huae hai dant sabaunke aushshasq ke
Husna ka mukka shabab bhi danda shikan

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19th January 2006, 11:19 AM

Wafa Ali Je,

May ek nehayat kanjoos shaks ho tareef kar nay K mamly may (Aisa mari Bivi khay te hay)

Aap kay andazay bia, aur sochnay ka Angle.. bilkul hat kar hay,,
i realy like your ashar.. sirf thori se miushkil hoote hay pardh nay may..

lay kin koi baat nahi.. miray asharo ka bhi ya he haal hay..
"Likhy Moh-Sa Pardhnay Khud Aa"

May ek bar aur.. Ap kay andazay bayia.. aur Mouzo kay intekhab par Daad do ga.

Aur ap kay Agly kalam ka mumtazir raho ga.
Aap jab kabhi apna new ashar post kary
tw kia mujhy Privet Massage kar kay bata day gi ?

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duboya mujhko hone ne, na hota maiN to kya hota ?
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Fiqray farda na karo, Mahy-e-ghamy-e-dosh raho

Naly Bul Bul K suno aur hamatan Gosh Raho
Hum-nawa may bhi koi gul ho k khamosh raho ?
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Re: gazal - 19th January 2006, 07:07 PM

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Daste dua ho jayega

beemar tera dekhke daste dua ho jayega .
Tera yahan aekbar ka ana dava ho jayega .

Dilki ye kishkol to hamne kabhi kholi nahin
Koi de ya na de hamein sabka bhala ho jayega .

Phool ,patthar,kante ho ya ho bijliyonka khiraj
Jo bhi girega ish nasheman per hava ho jayega .

Yoon isharo aur kinayo mein kahoge kabtak
Jo jaban se apni keh do ge to kya ho jayega .

Loot le jao yahanse phool,patti.shakho,phal
Ye chaman ab kuch dinomein viran ho jayega .

Bana phirta he ye phiron aur shaddad ka beta
Khuda wahid ko chhor kar kya khuda ho jayega .?

Sham ke kandho pe roya khoon ke ansu suraj
Barbadyon ki rat ayegi tabah ho jayega .

Hamne “Wafa” waqt ki rassi kabhi thami nahin
Kuch bhi kahenge jamanese gilaa ho jayega .
janab aapko kuch suggestion dene the.pehla to y ki aap ek saath itni saari cheezen na post karen log nahi padhte hain itne sare ek saath maine bhi sare nahi padhe hain.
aur doosri baat aapne jo ye ghazal likhi hai iska kafiya theek nahi hai.kyunki aapne kayi baar alag alag tarah ka kafiya use kiya hai.main guzarish karunga ki aap is link ko padhen bahut kuch seekhne ko milega wahan aapko.

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthr...?threadid=2125


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Khmoshhai - 21st January 2006, 01:52 PM

Khamosh hai

Teer bhi khamosh hai,talwar bhi khamosh hai.
Khanjronki vo chamakti dhar bhi khamosh hai.

Loot raha tha iss chamake mathe ka sindoor jab
Khoon se rangi hooi bazaar bhi khamosh hai.

Qufla kaisa lag gaya insaniyat ke hoth par
Aunke dar khamosh hai deewar bhi khamosh hai.

Ankhein khuli rahgai aur jaban lataki rahi
Dekha sabhi hi ankhne deedar bhi khamosh hai

Mein wafa dekhkar phoot phoot kar rota raha
Iss shaharke haqparast kirdar bhi khamosh hai

Iss khamoshi mein paleinge sanp nafrat ke wafa
Kya huva izhar ko izhar bhi khamosh hai

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Qataa - 22nd January 2006, 11:49 PM

Ayena
Betha raha mein tham kar ye jigar ka ayena
Yar abto rok lo apni nazar ka ayena

Muddatein gujarai ke tuta nahin aunka garur
Yar ab to tor do aiske shahar ka ayena.
   
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qataa - 25th January 2006, 05:45 AM

Bechnewale
Jara chhupkar chupkese becho adaon bechnewalo
Sharm kuchh bhi nahin aati sadaon bechnewalo

Hame bhi talashi hai ke miljae marham dilka
Kahan chhupkar baithe ho davaon bechne walo


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Ham khush hain - 27th January 2006, 03:45 AM

Hum khush hain

Khul jae zulfe yar to bhi hum khush hain
Wig ki ho deewar to bhi hum khush hain

Choudvin ka chand hoto hai nur ala nur
Laltain ki ho bahar to bhi hum khush hain

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qataa - 28th January 2006, 02:39 AM

Khuda semang

Khuda se manglo jo mangna hai mangnewalo
Wahanse koi bhi sail thukraya nahin jata

Milega sab wahinse apni apni jarf ke mwafiq
Kisike tang damaman ko sahlaya nahin jata

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Gazal - 31st January 2006, 03:42 AM

Badal gaye hain

Rafta rafta yar ke sab gam badal gaye hain
Kuchh vo hai badale huae kuchh ham badal gaye hain.

Mehfil me jab aten hai to ankhein nahi jukti
Andaze sarkar ke kuchh dhang badal gaye hain

Rukh hai rafikon ka ab badli hava ke sath
Ab mausame gulzar ke sab rang badal gaye hain

Hathiyar bhi badle huae dushman bhi hai badla hua
Maidan bhi badla hua jang badal gae hain

Kya thi majal ankhein utha kar dekhta koi
Lutti hooi bahar ke dam badal gaye hain

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Qataa - 2nd February 2006, 03:01 AM

Tarah

Kanton mein rahtahun mein havaon ki tarah
Dard mein rahtahun mein davaon ki tarah

Felahun khushbu ki tarah fulke dilmein
Dile mukhlis mein hu mein duaon ki tarah

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Nikli - 4th February 2006, 05:50 AM

Nikli
Hath to uthe magar dua nahin nikli
Hai tere shishe mein dava nahin nikli
Kaise chalaye yar tune bhi ae khanjar
Kat gaya ruvan ruvan sada nahin nikli
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4th February 2006, 11:37 AM

Zaber dast bhooot khoob..

your way of thinking is hat kay..

i love your work... every idea.. your angle of looking is different

waiting for yours mind next creation..


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qataa - 5th February 2006, 06:09 AM

Kyun nahin aye

Tassavur ki mehfilon mein ate ho bar bar
Ankhein bichhai rahmein kyun nahin aye

Khawabon ke regzar mein bhatkoge kab talak
Dilko jalaya yadmein kyun nahin aye

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Ayahun - 7th February 2006, 02:38 AM

Ayahun

Tere shahar mein janisar ayahun
Bari doorse mein tera bimar ayahun

Teri gali ke logo ne chalne na diya paidal
Is liye ambulance mein savar ayahun

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Kashish - 8th February 2006, 10:36 PM

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Mere gunahaon mein kashish hai abhi baki
Ati hai tauba khinchkar Machnatish ki tarah

Khijanme bhi ye chaman mahaka hua hai
Aten hain parvane abhi atish ki tarah

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Ho jaye - 10th February 2006, 05:12 AM

Ho jaye

Tham lun jis zarf ko woh jam ho jaye
Kash mera raz bhi kuchh aam ho jaye.

Dekhlo mehfilme bhi mehmil se jara
Thore tabassum se mera kam ho jaye

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Moqa dijye - 11th February 2006, 07:16 AM

Moqa dijye

Marmari jimson ko yun na bhun lijye
Chandni raton me baitha na kijye

khilte raho na bar bar dil ke bag me
Kaliyon ka bhi haque hai moqa dijye

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12th February 2006, 12:29 PM

Dilentine
Dil aek hai aur chahne wale mile hazar
Ye mamala hai ishq ka ye nahin bazaar

Valentine say to hame kya fark parta hai
Kar sakte nahin is dilke tukre hum barbar

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Qataa - 17th February 2006, 10:06 AM

Tere intezar

Tere intezarka matlab nahin raha
Waqt ki sarhadein sumsam hogai.

Ate agar baharmein palete sab phool
Ab chaman ki zindgi nilam hogai

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qataa - 21st February 2006, 03:09 AM

Diye

Raste to kiye bandh nahin abhi
Har mor per magar pehre bitha diye

Imtehan teri rasme wafa ka hai jara
Ahni kante har qadam per jama diye.

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Aekpal - 24th February 2006, 09:23 AM

Aekpal
Aekpal tere bagair gujarti nathi kabhi
Barso huae ab tere bagair hi gujardi

Tanhainya tut kar lati thi aek ghutan
Tanhaion ki thak kar gesun sanvardi

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KHUDI aur khuda - 4th March 2006, 04:55 AM

KHUDI aur KHUDA

Khudi aur Khuda mein ulze hue hain.
Khudi ka matlab na samze hue hain.

Khudi ki bulandi badalti hai taqdir;
Raza-e Ilahi se miltihai tadbir.

Khudi se banta hai iman kamil
Khuda ki raza har amlon me shamil.

Khudi ka nasheman tere dil main hai.
Falak jis tarah ankh ke til me hai.

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sachvi lejo - 5th March 2006, 03:31 AM

સાચવી લેજો.
મળીછે પ્રિતજે તમને જરા સાચવી લેજો.
મળે હાર થોડી તો એને જાળવી લેજો.

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5th March 2006, 01:46 PM

Assalam-o-Alikum Piari Bahen,

As I always say.. Your work is different from all

But I found some mistake in the basic idea of your last Nazam Khudi,
Kindly not it down as follow,

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"Khudi aur Khuda mein ulze hue hain.
Khudi ka matlab na samze hue hain."

Khudi aur khuda may dekho saaf farak hay
Ek banda-e-ajiz aur wo zataye Azal hay

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"Khudi se banta hai iman kamil
Khuda ki raza har amlon me shamil."

Bando ko sedha raha dekhay hay Allaha
Phir marzi insaan par us ky amal ke hay

My apology if you find me harsh

Keep ing
Allaha Hafiz


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Na tha kuchch to KHuda tha, kuchch na hota to KHuda hota
duboya mujhko hone ne, na hota maiN to kya hota ?
(Mirza Ghalib)

Q Zia-Kar Bano, Sooday Faramosh Raho ?
Fiqray farda na karo, Mahy-e-ghamy-e-dosh raho

Naly Bul Bul K suno aur hamatan Gosh Raho
Hum-nawa may bhi koi gul ho k khamosh raho ?
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kabhi - 10th March 2006, 07:23 AM

Kabhi

Ujaalon me hamesha muze dekhne walo
Andheron me bhi gaurse dekha karo kabhi

Chamakte shahar me to milte ho har ghari
Buzte diye ke nagar me bhi mila karo kabhi.

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Saya - 14th March 2006, 08:26 AM

Saya

Barhta raha gamoka ye saya
Na aap aye na paygam aya.


Ankhoke sapne palko se tute
Udasiyone bhi panja jamaya.


Havaaon ki bhini lahar aek aai
Barkhane pallo apna bichhaya.

Jali barishome hamari tamanaa
Tumare jalveka matam hai chhaya.

Bhare mayqade me larkhti ahen
Na aap aye na paygam aya.

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Gazal - 18th March 2006, 02:57 AM

Zehmat na kijye

Izhare iltefat ki zehmat na kijye.
Divarke bhi kan hai ahat na kijye.

Toot ye jayegi to royenge footkar
Hadse gujarkar mohabbat na kijye.

Ab koi maqtalmen hoga imtehan tera
Khanjar bapa mohsin hai harqat na kijye.

Mein to wahi hun jo me tha pahle tere liye
Badla hua mausam hai kuchh nafrat na kijye.

Kante mile to shauk se chun lijye wafa
Ujde chaman mein phoolki hasarat na kijye.

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Qattaa - 23rd March 2006, 03:47 AM

Qattaa

Udasiyon ki nav le kar kyon chala karein,
Joolmaton ke aab ko aao ke phaaar dein.

Ham to banayenge chaman apne hath se
Chahe hame wo phool de ya to khaar dein.
   
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