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Huii Sabse Paraayi
  
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"in mehkate fizaaoN meiN tera naam likh diya" -
7th January 2010, 11:56 PM
Mahfil ko Diya ka aadaab,
ek pyaar bhari Nagma pesh kar rahi hun Umiid hai aap sab ko pasand aayegi ................... in mehkate fizaaoN meiN tera naam likh diya phool phool patti patti sar-e-aam likh diya teri nazroN meiN daikha jo pyaar ka samundar maine dil ke sahil per ,tujhko salaam likh diya meri tishnagee ko tujhse hi milti hai raahat chhlke aankhoN se ashQ to, tune jaam likh diya ya rab, uske dum se hai mere duniyaaN kayam tune lakeer meiN mere khusi tamaam likh diya na daulat hai, na shohrat ,na husN be-misaal fir bhi tumne nachees ko gulandaam likh diya milti hai teri Qurbat meN baaghay jinaaN mujhko sajde meiN teri "Diya" ne yeh kalaam likh diya gulandaam = Beloved, who is as soft as a flower baaghay jinaan- Jannat  Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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8th January 2010, 12:04 AM
diyaji!!!!!
bahut hi khoobsurat rachna bani hai......phoolo si sugandith...... aakhir ki do panktiya mujhe kahaas pasand aayi..... masoom si lagi mujhe..... aapka dhnyavad aur shubkamnao sahit.... likhiye jaroor se, Aandhiya Gam Ki Chalegi To Sawar Jaoonga Me Mai To Dariya Hu Samoondar Me Utar Jaaonga Me Mujhe Suli Pe Chadane Ki Jaroorat Kya Hai Logo Mere Haato Se Kalam Cheen Lo Yuhi Mar Jaoonga Me (When i received You in my heart everything changed for me) |
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8th January 2010, 12:05 AM
Diya Ji....Aadaab ! aapne bahut khubsurat ehsaas bayaan kiye hai....sabhi ashaar pur asar lage mujhe....yuhi likhte rahiye....
maqtaa mujhe khaas pasand aaya.... milti hai teri Qurbat meN baaghay jinaaN mujhko sajde meiN teri "Diya" ne yeh kalaam likh diya dil se daad hazir hai.... apna khayal rakhiyega... duaaon ke saath....  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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Huii Sabse Paraayi
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8th January 2010, 08:58 PM
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Amit jee pranam, aapko meri koshish achhi lagi mujhe behat khusi hui aise hi saath dete rahiye .....apna khayal rakhiye DuaoN ke saath Diya  Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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9th January 2010, 12:05 AM
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aapka yeh kalaam bahut pyaara hai... mujhe behad pasand aaya...dil se daad haazir hai... qubuul kijiye.... aapka dost, vikram... Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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Huii Sabse Paraayi
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11th January 2010, 03:15 PM
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dil se daad kabul hai Diya Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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Huii Sabse Paraayi
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11th January 2010, 03:17 PM
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Vikram jee, aapne humari rachna padhe, apni kimti rae diye ehi bahut hai humesha khus rahiye DuaoN ke saath Diya Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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11th January 2010, 04:42 PM
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radhe radhe bahut khoob kalaam kabile taareef hai dil se daad kubul kijiye aise hi likhte rahen aur hame anandit karti rahe aapka ajnabi dost Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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11th January 2010, 07:18 PM
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wahhhhhhhhhhhhhh....... bahut khoob Diya..... ehsaas bahut khoobsurat hai ... is dilnashi mausam me mohabbat ke haseen rang ghol diya tumne....dil se daad hazir hai.... yuhi likhti raho.... khush raho........ rep++++++++++++++++++++++++ added....  "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa , ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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12th January 2010, 12:23 PM
Diya Jii,,
Wah janab... kia baat hai,, Aap k likhe ka andaaz-e-biyaaN, soch, khiyaal, ehsaasaat, sab kuch kamal hai... Aap ko jitni daad di jaye kam pad jaye shayed...... (Rep+++)Aise hi likhtay rahiye aur humain heraan karte rahiye.... Regardz,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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Huii Sabse Paraayi
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12th January 2010, 02:23 PM
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aapki id bahut pyaara hai aap hume bhagbat premi lagte hain aapko nachees ki kalam pasand aayi bahut khusi hui hum koshish karenge ki isse behtar likhein aur aapko khusi milte rahe lekin ek sikayat hai aapne khud ko humari Dost kaha fir ajnabi  mahfil mein aate rahiye jaan pehchan badh jayegi  khus rahiye Diya Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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12th January 2010, 02:41 PM
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ye sher sabse jyada pasand aaya..... teri nazroN meiN daikha jo pyaar ka samundar maine dil ke sahil per ,tujhko salaam likh diya bacchi badi ho gayi  regards |
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RADHE RADHE
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12th January 2010, 09:44 PM
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radhe radhe meri id ke naam ko pad kar tumhe achha laga mujhe khushi hai is baat ki ye tumne sahi pahchaana ki mai ek premi hi hoon shayar nahi par shayri me ishk ke itne umda khyaal se mai rubaroo hota hoon isliye yahan mai aaya tum logon ke beech unhi khyaalon ko padkar kabhi kabhi koi shabd mere jahan me bhi aa jaate hai to likh leta hoon tum jaisa umda to nahi par fir bhi uske charno me mera nivedan hi hota hai aur ajnabi isliye kaha ki is mahfil me abhi mujhe kaun jaanta hai haan jaan pahchaan bad jaayegi to ajnabi hat jaayega vaise dost to mai hoon hi tumhaara dost Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com
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14th January 2010, 02:15 PM
Diyaa,
Bahot khoobsurat ahsaas hai, Daad kubul karo Best wishes Rashid Quote:
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Huii Sabse Paraayi
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14th January 2010, 03:24 PM
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aap bahut kismat wale ho premi hona koi aam baat nahi janab khayal umdaa ya ghatia nahi hote Dil ki awaaz humesha khubsoorat hoti hai aap kahne ki koshish karte rahiye waqt ke saath saath juzbaat ko bhi lafz mil jayega hum koi umdaa shayara nahi jo bhi hai is mahfil ke wajah se hai ehi se suruwat kiye hain aage uparwala ki marzi ..................... ajnabee ab aap nahi rahe aap SDC pareevar ke member hai aate rahiye Diya Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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22nd January 2010, 09:39 PM
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dear diya................khoobsurat ahsaaso.n par daad hazir hai. duao.n ke saath diii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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27th January 2010, 02:58 PM
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bahut dino ke baad aapko apne thread per dekh kar khusi hui daad dilse kabul hai ............ Humesha saath banaye rakhiyega ab waqt hai bichhrne ka shayad fir kabhi yun hi mulaqat ho jaye plz bhulna mat apni Roshni ko with Lots of Love aapki Ujala Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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27th January 2010, 04:47 PM
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------------------------------------------------------ Sunita .....Diya ko bhi Banned kiya tha kya aap ne....??? Ye Bechari apko bata kar jaa rahi hai... ke "Ab Waqt hai bichhrne ka" ...  |
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4th February 2010, 07:30 PM
teri nazroN meiN daikha jo pyaar ka samundar
maine dil ke sahil per ,tujhko salaam likh diya Achcha hain bohat achcha hain..........wah kya khayaal hain ise kehte hain zubaan shayri ki........dad kabool kare Diya jee. Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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