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6th October 2004, 08:01 PM
Doston...
Sunita ji paras ji kunal veer priya ji...tusi logan ne bade dina da aye waada dita si ki kuch punjabi vich likhangaa...nasamajh kolo jo vi ban paaya tuhade aage rakhan jaa raheya...umeed hai pasand aauga.. Bhuaa khola baithi kole ankha vichon athruu bole kainde naina hole hole, ho kainde naina hole hole ki kariye hun 'yaar'... ho das kive kar laiye.... kive kar laiye hun 'pyaar', kive kar laiye kive kar laiye hun 'pyaar' ... mathe tere suha teeka kive teri mein raah udeeka ohi galaan ohiyan cheesa, ho ohi galaan ohiyan cheesa chehte aaundi ae 'sarkaar' ho das kive kar laiye.... kive kar laiye hun 'pyaar', kive kar laiye kive kar laiye hun 'pyaar' ... babul di tu dhiye raani saadi soni nahi kahuni tere haathe mehndi da vi, ho tere hathe mehndi da vi hone he rang 'laal' ho das kive kar laiye.... kive kar laiye hun 'pyaar', kive kar laiye kive kar laiye hun 'pyaar' ... doli teri uthauna sokha lag ke gale ruwaunaa sokha kyon tu deta mainu dokha, kyon tu deta mainu dokha asi vi ta seege tere 'yaar' ho das kive kar laiye.... kive kar laiye hun 'pyaar', kive kar laiye kive kar laiye hun 'pyaar' ... kamliye tu yaad hai aauni tere baajon neend na aauni gar gar chalni ahi kahaani, ghar ghar chalni ahi kahaani tu deeta saanu 'maar' ho das kive kar laiye.... kive kar laiye hun 'pyaar', kive kar laiye kive kar laiye hun 'pyaar' ... jaa tur jaa tu hogayi parayi 'bhraa' sade teri 'maang' sajayi jag vich baliye sab harjaai, ho jag vich baliye sab harjaai kis bhraa nu kahiye 'yaar' ho das kive kar laiye.... kive kar laiye hun 'pyaar', kive kar laiye kive kar laiye hun 'pyaar' ... ho das kive kar laiye.... kive kar laiye hun 'pyaar', kive kar laiye kive kar laiye hun 'pyaar' ... Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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6th October 2004, 08:30 PM
Bhaiya..
Bahut hi vadiya likhya hai tusi... sach... aina sona legya mainu ki mainu words hi ni labde paye.. Bahut hi acha... bahut hi sundar..bahut hi khoobsoorat.. Dil di gal bade changi tarah.. tusi keh ditti.. Kedi line'aan nu fad ke kahan ki ae changiya lagiya.. bada aukha hai ae kehna.. kyunki mainu saara da saara hi bahut vadiya lageya.. Changa hi hai.. saanu saareya nu vi ik thaa labi hoyi ae jithe asi saare apne dukh sukh saanjhe kar line aa.. Tusi housla rakhiyo.. naal apna khayaal vi rakhiyo.. Chaldi aa.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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6th October 2004, 08:59 PM
mast bhai >
 < je tusi mere samne honde te main tuanu hune hi gale la lenda ... oji man gaye tusi gr8 ... oji tusi ta cha gey ho paji... e lo ji sadi tareef le lo te pangra pao sade naal ... o ji tusi tan dil khush kar deeta veerji... avi hi likhde rehna ... tusi ta jande ne sadi punjabi vaddi weak hai ... te asi jyada ni likh sakde.. khair wakai tusi badda changa likheya si... e shabd menu badde pasand aaye.... jaa tur jaa tu hogayi parayi 'bhraa' sade teri 'maang' sajayi jag vich baliye sab harjaai, ho jag vich baliye sab harjaai kis bhraa nu kahiye 'yaar' ho das kive kar laiye.... kive kar laiye hun 'pyaar', kive kar laiye kive kar laiye hun 'pyaar' ... veer ji apna khayal rakhi ... tuada pra.... kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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7th October 2004, 10:24 AM
mast mere brrah....
e ki likya tu meri ankha to hanju vehen lage... teriya galla par par k mere dil de taar tut tut k chuban lage.. mai ta aah vi na hun bhar saga... tere pyar di gal sun mai to ron laggi.. e kare dard da tu bua kholya ve.. mere dil di cheesa si vadh gaiya.. main ta firdi si kamli tera naam jup jup k.. tere kandya to mera vi khoon vehen laga.. sach mast bhaiya yahi bhaav uthe mere man me tumari ye punjabi dard bhari poem par ke...man to ro raha hai lekin aankhe aaj saath nahi de rahi..dil k to tukre hua ja rahe hai...magar jakhmo se khoon ki kami ho gayi..ab khoon bhi nahi nikalta...naasoor jo ban jaate hai kabhi kabhi jakhm apne behen bhaiyo ka dard par kar... chalti hu...izazet de..aur apna dhyan rakhe...paraye desh me ap ko apna dhyan khud hi rakhna parega....haal batate rahiyega.. urs sunita (udas) ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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7th October 2004, 09:02 PM
mast paji ...
oye tusi tan patthe chakk de si.. oji cha gey kasam rab di ... es trah hi likhde ravin... bas raj hi raj |
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8th October 2004, 05:11 AM
Mast Ji,
Tussi bada hi changa likhya.Saarai sher ek to wadkai ek aa.Sada dua rahegi kai aidan hi likhdai raho. Khayal Rakhiyo, Kavita Toota hua dil aur hoton pai hassi. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Pyaar wo nahi tha jo kisi nai kiya Pyaar woh hai jo koi nibha raha hai. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Maana ki woh log badnaseeb hotai hai Jinhai pyaar milta to hai par woh usai paichaan nahi paatai par woh log aur bhi badnaseeb hotai hai jinhai pyaar milta hai,woh usai paichaaan bhi jaatai hai par paa nahi saktai. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Its better to have loved and lost then to have ever loved before so what if the heart breaks at least you will know LOVE. |
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9th October 2004, 03:56 AM
Priya behna...changa mainue vi lagya ki tu athe aa ke apne veer de likhe nu samajhya te naale pasand kita.....ek gal tu bahut soni kahi ki sade saareya nu eh tha hegi jedi pure parivaar nu saanjha kithe hoi he....
tu mere naal he ta phir haaunsla te aapne mere naal hoya.... chal behna khayaal rakhi apna rabha rakha -tuhaada apna Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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9th October 2004, 04:32 AM
chote veer gale hun lag jaa yaar....je mein great han te phaji tusi vi kithe kam ho....mere likhe naal je tuhaada dil khush huya te aye te vade pra de vade bhag ne ... hor tuhadi punjabi bahut soni je ....
chote veer eda hi sada mere naal rahi -tuhada vadda ver Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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9th October 2004, 04:55 AM
sunita ji.....ena athruan nu sambh ke rakho..kade khushi vele lod paaugi...naal mere naal ta tusi saare ho hor kise di lod vi nahi je....je tusi saare mere naal ho kade lagda hi nahi ki hindustaan mere to visrya hoya he....
hamesha di tarah is vaar vi apne is bhra da tusi hauslaa badhayaa badha changa lagya....agge vi saada saath ese tarah nibhaunde rehna... -tuhadaa apna Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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9th October 2004, 04:57 AM
raj paji..
tusi padho te asi patthe na chaakiye fir ta gal hi nahin banu....veer esa tarah saade naal ravi te naale apna dhayan rakhi....hun veer keha he to shukriya kehan di lod ta na paau.... rab raakha -tuhaada apna Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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9th October 2004, 04:58 AM
Kavita ji...
Bade time baad gal ho rahi hai...eh changi gal he ki jado vi mein punjabich likhna tusi aa hi jaande ho.... Esa tarah nimaane da saath nibhaaunde rehnaa -tuhaada apna Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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9th October 2004, 05:50 AM
Mast Ji,
Assi taan aithai aa.Ya jado punjabi ch kuch likhya dissda tai apna watan...apna punjab yaad aunda and thwada likhan da style bhi bohot changa aa.Saada saath hamesha rahega tai dua hai ki tussi hamesha aida hi tai aito bhi wadiya likhdai raho. Rab rakha, Kavita Toota hua dil aur hoton pai hassi. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Pyaar wo nahi tha jo kisi nai kiya Pyaar woh hai jo koi nibha raha hai. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Maana ki woh log badnaseeb hotai hai Jinhai pyaar milta to hai par woh usai paichaan nahi paatai par woh log aur bhi badnaseeb hotai hai jinhai pyaar milta hai,woh usai paichaaan bhi jaatai hai par paa nahi saktai. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Its better to have loved and lost then to have ever loved before so what if the heart breaks at least you will know LOVE. |
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12th October 2004, 10:34 AM
Mast mast jee...
mainu maafi de dena...kyonki aine khubsurat kalaam nu aje tak salaam na kar paayi...kuch likhna chahndi see...par panjabi ch main kithe tuhada muqabla kar sakni haan...ais layi bus tusi jee meri tarfon hun daad hee kabuul kar lo te changaa... kamliye tu yaad hai aauni tere baajon neend na aauni gar gar chalni ahi kahaani, ghar ghar chalni ahi kahaani tu deeta saanu 'maar' ho das kive kar laiye.... kive kar laiye hun 'pyaar', kive kar laiye kive kar laiye hun 'pyaar' ... jaa tur jaa tu hogayi parayi 'bhraa' sade teri 'maang' sajayi jag vich baliye sab harjaai, ho jag vich baliye sab harjaai kis bhraa nu kahiye 'yaar' ho das kive kar laiye.... kive kar laiye hun 'pyaar', kive kar laiye kive kar laiye hun 'pyaar' ... aina lafzaan ne te dil noo taar taar kar ditta...aina dard bhara ehsaas hai naa.. kee dasiye hun...sada khush raho...kadi akaalaa na mehsoos karna apne aap nuu..asi hain na aithe...tuhade sab apne... paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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12th October 2004, 08:28 PM
Paras Ji...
Maafi mang ke mainu sharmindaa na karo...tusi aithe aaye te aithe aapne dil di gal kahi ena hi bahut hai mere lai..are tusi mera sirf saath devo muqaabla te akhare vich honda hai parivaar vich nahi parivaar vich ta sirf pyaar hounda hai...tusi mere naale ho te mein kade kalaa ho hi nahi sakda paras ji... eda hi hameshaa mera saath nibhaaunde rehna -tuhaadaa apna Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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Re: das kive kar laiye.... -
28th January 2005, 08:39 PM
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anu, kuch ahesaas aise hote hai ... jaha waqt par n aane ka afsos jaroor ho par der se hi sahi par aa gaye ooska aanand kam nahi hota...... aise hi ek ahesaas ko tumhare kalam se maine mahsoos kiya..... muje khushi hai k ise maie padh paayi..... khush raho. tumhari di |
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2nd February 2005, 08:12 PM
Meena Di...aapne beshak sahi farmaaya...aapne yaha aakar mujhe aur prerit kiya hai likhne ke liye...aapka pyaar aur saath bas yunhi bana rahe...
aapka apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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Namaskaar Mast Bhai......kaya khoob likha hai aapne, bahut accha geet bana hai yeh, ahsaas dil fareb lage......likhtey rahiye....kush rahiye aur mahfil mein aate rahiye. god bless u  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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14th December 2008, 11:52 PM
behad shukriya sunita ji..aapne ek arse baad kuch yaaden taaza kar diyee...
-aapka apna Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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1st May 2009, 09:19 PM
Ik vaar fer padh ke dil baagh baagh ho gaya.... puraana sama vi kinna changa si....
Khush ravo!!! ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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3rd May 2009, 05:45 PM
shukriya priya..ek vaar per tusi kuch supnayaa vich le gaye...
rajii raho !! Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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