tera chaman mehkaounga..........

[rajveeer]

dosto yeh nazam mere dil ki gehrai say nikli hai......umeed hai appko pasand aiyegi......or app reply zaroor dogay...app bataogay ki mere dil ki awaaz kaisee hai......appka dost raj.....

zindagi bhar hum ek doosray kay saath chaltay rahayngay,
magar hum do kinaray hai hum na kabhi milayngay,
mujhay teri baaton say yeh ehsaas aksar hota hai,
phir bhee yeh dil tere liye na janay kiyon rota hai,
tu aisee chhahat hai jo mere dil main bassi hai,
tu aisee hasrat hai jisay main pana chhahta hoon,
tu aisee bahar hai jo nahi mere chaman kay liye,
tu aisa qarar hai jo nahi mere man kay liye,
phir bhee na janay tum kiyon meri aakhri khawish ho,
mar mar kay jinda rehnay ki ek aakhri koshish ho,
dil kay taaron say armano ki suie say,
tujhay apnay dil main piroo liya hai maine,
bhatktay khabon ko teri ankho main sanjo liya hai maine,
soachta hoon ek din to inko tutna hee hai,
jeetay jee ek din tera saath chhutna hee hai,
phir kiyon na yeh dil yeh khaab tu hee toray,
beech safar main mera saath tu hee chhoray,
lakin mujhay mera dil kehta hai yeh pukaar kay,
ki nahi tu aisa hargiz nahi karegee,
kiyonki tere seenay main ek pyar bhara dil dharkta hai,
jo mujhay har haal main khush dekhna chhahta hai,
isee aas pay jiye ja raha hoon,
har lamha tera intzaar kiye ja raha hoon,
kehna chhahta hoon bhut kush lakin lab siye ja raha hoon,
tere liye bhatak raha hoon har kahin zamee assman main,
zamee pay pathar hoon tuta tara hoon aasmaan main,
ek din to teri thokar say sakoon pa jaounga,
or mujhay dekh kar tu jo mangay gee khuda say,
teri uss duaa ko khud mitkar poori kar jaounga,
mujhay tu kush bhee samajh magar main kush bhee nahi,
khali daman beqrar dil sukhi aankhain,
tutay sapnay luta jahaan sulgtay armaan,
yahi hai shayad ab meri asli pehchaan,
magar tujhay de jaounga khushiyon bhara daman,
dil ka sakoon or aankhon main sunehri sapnay,
baharon say saja ik jahaan or armaan apnay,
tu khush rehna kabhi mera gham na karna,
rah ki dhool hoon khaakh main mil jaounga,
khud lut chukka hoon magar tera chaman mehkaounga..
tera chaman mehkaounga.....tera chaman mekhkaounga.



waiting for ur reply.......appka........raj.......

[red_ruchika]

aik baar aur ham aapki nazm ki tahe dil se tareef karte hain...
vakiye main,maan gaye aapko.

[sunita thakur]

Originally posted by rajveeer
dosto yeh nazam mere dil ki gehrai say nikli hai......umeed hai appko pasand aiyegi......or app reply zaroor dogay...app bataogay ki mere dil ki awaaz kaisee hai......appka dost raj.....

zindagi bhar hum ek doosray kay saath chaltay rahayngay,
magar hum do kinaray hai hum na kabhi milayngay,
mujhay teri baaton say yeh ehsaas aksar hota hai,
phir bhee yeh dil tere liye na janay kiyon rota hai,
tu aisee chhahat hai jo mere dil main bassi hai,
tu aisee hasrat hai jisay main pana chhahta hoon,
tu aisee bahar hai jo nahi mere chaman kay liye,
tu aisa qarar hai jo nahi mere man kay liye,
phir bhee na janay tum kiyon meri aakhri khawish ho,
mar mar kay jinda rehnay ki ek aakhri koshish ho,
dil kay taaron say armano ki suie say,
tujhay apnay dil main piroo liya hai maine,
bhatktay khabon ko teri ankho main sanjo liya hai maine,
soachta hoon ek din to inko tutna hee hai,
jeetay jee ek din tera saath chhutna hee hai,
phir kiyon na yeh dil yeh khaab tu hee toray,
beech safar main mera saath tu hee chhoray,
lakin mujhay mera dil kehta hai yeh pukaar kay,
ki nahi tu aisa hargiz nahi karegee,
kiyonki tere seenay main ek pyar bhara dil dharkta hai,
jo mujhay har haal main khush dekhna chhahta hai,
isee aas pay jiye ja raha hoon,
har lamha tera intzaar kiye ja raha hoon,
kehna chhahta hoon bhut kush lakin lab siye ja raha hoon,
tere liye bhatak raha hoon har kahin zamee assman main,
zamee pay pathar hoon tuta tara hoon aasmaan main,
ek din to teri thokar say sakoon pa jaounga,
or mujhay dekh kar tu jo mangay gee khuda say,
teri uss duaa ko khud mitkar poori kar jaounga,
mujhay tu kush bhee samajh magar main kush bhee nahi,
khali daman beqrar dil sukhi aankhain,
tutay sapnay luta jahaan sulgtay armaan,
yahi hai shayad ab meri asli pehchaan,
magar tujhay de jaounga khushiyon bhara daman,
dil ka sakoon or aankhon main sunehri sapnay,
baharon say saja ik jahaan or armaan apnay,
tu khush rehna kabhi mera gham na karna,
rah ki dhool hoon khaakh main mil jaounga,
khud lut chukka hoon magar tera chaman mehkaounga..
tera chaman mehkaounga.....tera chaman mekhkaounga.



waiting for ur reply.......appka........raj.......

hello raj

esi shidat se likhtey rahey to appki manzil door nahi, dil se dua karti hu appke liye.

[rajveeer]

sunita ji raj tahe dil se appka shukar guzaar hai...or umeed karta hai ki app yu hee meri hosla afzai karti raho gi......raj.....

[rajveeer]

aik baar aur ham aapki nazm ki tahe dil se tareef karte hain...
vakiye main,maan gaye aapko.


------------
"sanam" chahe zindagi se bas itna
aik mutthi main kaid kar loon,
yeh aasman hai jitna!"

ruchi ji app meri post par i meri nazam ko parha or saraha iske liye appka shukria aada karta hoon.....umeed karta hoon yu hee app meri hosla afzai karti rahogi.......take care.......raj......

[pooja_d]

Originally posted by rajveeer
dosto yeh nazam mere dil ki gehrai say nikli hai......umeed hai appko pasand aiyegi......or app reply zaroor dogay...app bataogay ki mere dil ki awaaz kaisee hai......appka dost raj.....

zindagi bhar hum ek doosray kay saath chaltay rahayngay,
magar hum do kinaray hai hum na kabhi milayngay,
mujhay teri baaton say yeh ehsaas aksar hota hai,
phir bhee yeh dil tere liye na janay kiyon rota hai,
tu aisee chhahat hai jo mere dil main bassi hai,
tu aisee hasrat hai jisay main pana chhahta hoon,
tu aisee bahar hai jo nahi mere chaman kay liye,
tu aisa qarar hai jo nahi mere man kay liye,
phir bhee na janay tum kiyon meri aakhri khawish ho,
mar mar kay jinda rehnay ki ek aakhri koshish ho,
dil kay taaron say armano ki suie say,
tujhay apnay dil main piroo liya hai maine,
bhatktay khabon ko teri ankho main sanjo liya hai maine,
soachta hoon ek din to inko tutna hee hai,
jeetay jee ek din tera saath chhutna hee hai,
phir kiyon na yeh dil yeh khaab tu hee toray,
beech safar main mera saath tu hee chhoray,
lakin mujhay mera dil kehta hai yeh pukaar kay,
ki nahi tu aisa hargiz nahi karegee,
kiyonki tere seenay main ek pyar bhara dil dharkta hai,
jo mujhay har haal main khush dekhna chhahta hai,
isee aas pay jiye ja raha hoon,
har lamha tera intzaar kiye ja raha hoon,
kehna chhahta hoon bhut kush lakin lab siye ja raha hoon,
tere liye bhatak raha hoon har kahin zamee assman main,
zamee pay pathar hoon tuta tara hoon aasmaan main,
ek din to teri thokar say sakoon pa jaounga,
or mujhay dekh kar tu jo mangay gee khuda say,
teri uss duaa ko khud mitkar poori kar jaounga,
mujhay tu kush bhee samajh magar main kush bhee nahi,
khali daman beqrar dil sukhi aankhain,
tutay sapnay luta jahaan sulgtay armaan,
yahi hai shayad ab meri asli pehchaan,
magar tujhay de jaounga khushiyon bhara daman,
dil ka sakoon or aankhon main sunehri sapnay,
baharon say saja ik jahaan or armaan apnay,
tu khush rehna kabhi mera gham na karna,
rah ki dhool hoon khaakh main mil jaounga,
khud lut chukka hoon magar tera chaman mehkaounga..
tera chaman mehkaounga.....tera chaman mekhkaounga.



waiting for ur reply.......appka........raj.......

dil kay taaron say armano ki suie say,
tujhay apnay dil main piroo liya hai maine,

ye do line kya mein kisike naam kar du? aap jante ho na kiske naam karungi............haa lekin naam aapka hi lungi..don worry

aapki tarha reply karu kya.............veer ji aapko pooja ka bahot sara pyaar...........kya kahu aapki iss nazam ke bare me...........shabd bewaffai kar gaye aaj.............ab age likhungi to aap marenge mujhe...hai na...............

aaj apki ye itni purai nazam yahan parh ke achha laga..........bahot achha likha hai aapne.......unhi likhte rahiyega........meri daad kabool kijiye ji..........

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