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8th October 2007, 03:41 AM
 Hi SAKHI BAS ITNA SA KAAM KAR, YE SAARE ILZAAM MERE NAAM KAR EK DO PAIMANE SE MERA KYA HOGA, SARA MAIKHANA MERE NAAM KAR (N.M) Dunya ke sitam ka koi hisaab nahi, Lekin meri houslo ka bhi jawaab nahi...
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8th October 2007, 09:24 AM
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gar hota mumkin to beshak maiN yeh kar deti, sarra maikhana kaya har maikhana tere naam kar deti, par jaha to har koi mera diwana hai, eh mere ashiq, maikhana chorr, Kaash !maangi hoti tune meri zindgi, bin sochey zindgi naam tere kar deti.................... .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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8th October 2007, 05:32 PM
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achaa sher hai. vaise aap achaa to likhatee hee hai. jab bhi dhaval milta hai aap ki tareef karta hai. aap ke is shr ke reply men ghulam ali sahaab ki ek ghazal paish karta hoon. kaun hai jisane may nahin chakkhi kaun jhuuthi qasam uthaata hai mayakade se jo bach niakalata hai teri aankhon mein duub jaata hai piye ja raha huun, jiye ja raha huun jawaani ko dhokha diye ja raha huun judaayi hi tha zindagi ka muqaddar bahut ji chuka lijiye ja raha huun bahut zakm khaaye magar raaston par charaagaan to kuchh kuchh kiye ja raha huun bhulaana mujhe itana aasaan na hoga kayi daastaanein diye ja raha huun kashish koyi aisi hai jine mein ' aarif' ke mar mar ke bhi main jiye ja raha huun regards manu |
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15th October 2007, 09:51 AM
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namaskaar manu g, kaise haiN aap. g haan, dhaval se aapke bare meiN baat hue thi, accha hai na do bade bade shayar ek doosrey ke etne paas rahtey haiN manu g, ab kaya kahuN aapne to mere sher ke jawaab meiN Gulaam Ali Saheb ki gazal likh di......maiN es akabil kaha ki mere sher ka jawaab unki gazal se ho. aapne mera sher pasand kiya dil se shukriya yu hi padtey rahiyega aur aapni rai detey rahiyega. god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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