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4th November 2006, 01:57 PM
Har Dam Maine Manga Hai Tujhko Hi Rb Se Kya Sochta Hai Ab To Tu Aaja Har Raat Ke Andhre Me Manga Kya Sochta Hai Ab To Tu Aaja Din Ke Har Ujale Mai Manga Kya Sochta Hai Ab To Tu Aaja Tujhe Maine Har Mahefil Mai Manga Kya Sochta Hai Ab To Tu Aaja Tujhe Maine Har Tanhai Mai Manga Kya Sochta Hai Ab To Tu Aaja Meri Rah Mai Hardam Kante Bichaye Teri Rah Mai Fulo Ki Khatir Ansu Khatm Ho Gaye Tere Intezar Mai Kya Sochta Hai Ab To Tu Aaja Har Kisi Ne Mera Saath Choda Kya Sochta Hai Ab To Tu Aaja Akhir Tak Uhi Chaha Hai Tuzhko Kya Sochta Hai Ab To Tu Aaja Ab To Saanse Chootne Lagi Hai Kya Sochta Hai Ab To Tu Aaja Na Aya Meri Zindgi Mai Kabhi Tu Are Udha Hai Janaza Ab To Tu Aa Ja Md.Zahid Ali…… |
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6th November 2006, 12:03 PM
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bahut accha likha hai aapne, par ek baat kahu jo hum mangety hai.n woh kabhi nahi milta, kaya karey humey pata hai, phir bhi duao mai.n kuch na kuch mangtey hi rahtey hai.n bahut accha likha hai apane yu hi likhtey rahiye. aapki di  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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7th November 2006, 03:18 PM
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7th November 2006, 04:32 PM
Har Dam Maine Manga Hai Tujhko Hi Rb Se
Kya Sochta Hai Ab To Tu Aaja Har Raat Ke Andhre Me Manga Kya Sochta Hai Ab To Tu Aaja Din Ke Har Ujale Mai Manga Kya Sochta Hai Ab To Tu Aaja Tujhe Maine Har Mahefil Mai Manga Kya Sochta Hai Ab To Tu Aaja Tujhe Maine Har Tanhai Mai Manga Kya Sochta Hai Ab To Tu Aaja Meri Rah Mai Hardam Kante Bichaye Teri Rah Mai Fulo Ki Khatir Ansu Khatm Ho Gaye Tere Intezar Mai Kya Sochta Hai Ab To Tu Aaja Har Kisi Ne Mera Saath Choda Kya Sochta Hai Ab To Tu Aaja Akhir Tak Uhi Chaha Hai Tuzhko Kya Sochta Hai Ab To Tu Aaja Ab To Saanse Chootne Lagi Hai Kya Sochta Hai Ab To Tu Aaja Na Aya Meri Zindgi Mai Kabhi Tu Are Udha Hai Janaza Ab To Tu Aa Ja zahid bhai ko mera pyar bhara salaam......zahid ajj pehli daffa appko parha yakee maniye bhut acha lagga appke ehsaas bhut ummda hai.....lafzon ke saath bhee acha khel lete ho....or koshish karo bhut acha likh sakte ho...is koshish par meri dil se daad kabool karna.....yu hee likhte rehna....rab rakha....raj....... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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